~ Memories ~ (Ai Yori Aoshi & ~Enishi~)

Szwagier · Post by **Szwagier** » Sat Apr 14, 2007 5:17 pm

Wow, really neat stuff, especially since it's your first production.

Good job on synching, and creating flow. You defienietly hear the music, and know how to handle it. And good scene selection provided nice mood and story (I haven't watch the anime, yet I wasn't confused by the scenes). The other girls scenes seemed like a filler though - since you concetrated the story on the two main (?) characters it would be better to stick with them, and cut a bit of audio if you runned out of scenes.

I think you should do less fades to white/black and more fades from scene to scene. And that's because your fades to white/black are a bit rough and too short in many places. Also there was just a bit too much of them (imho)

Another issue are some effects. As people stated before you used a bit too much over-saturation. Also bars at 01:59-02:02 didn't quite fit imho.

All in all, very nice debut,
3.7/5

SoH · Post by **SoH** » Sat Apr 14, 2007 6:55 pm

nice dude

Ayanefan · Post by **Ayanefan** » Sat Apr 14, 2007 11:28 pm

Awesome stuff!

n4rU · Post by **n4rU** » Sun Apr 15, 2007 2:44 am

a comment by Koop and AtomX

I'm very surprised !!
Thnaks another for your comment too ^^ i'm very happy having comment for my first video especially by all amv maker all over the world

Funky-kun · Post by **Funky-kun** » Sun Apr 15, 2007 5:04 am

good job for a first vid

i guess in 2005 the song wasnt that popular as now

but the flow and mood of the amv was great

keep up the good work

Niwa · Post by **Niwa** » Sun Apr 15, 2007 2:09 pm

Good stuff

tho the song is pretty much overused but i still like it ! btw good job on ur poster

(lub those colors :3)

n4rU · Post by **n4rU** » Sun Apr 15, 2007 2:17 pm

Thank you very much for all comment

I'll improve myself in oder to become a great AMV Maker ^^

Full Metal Sempai · Post by **Full Metal Sempai** » Tue Apr 17, 2007 6:48 am

Great first job man.Looks like this one year and a half were spent well.^^
The quality was very good,the song amazing and the concept,though that of a classic romance,got a different meaning thanks to the clever opening/ending.The editing was also very neat and you used a variety of effects,not just the classical ones.

However,like a lot of people have commented before,you used over-saturation too much making your vid too bright at times.And at 0:09-0:10 the pic that Aoi was holding got a bit red pixelation.
However,the amvwas terrific!!^^

Bakadeshi · Post by **Bakadeshi** » Thu Apr 19, 2007 4:04 pm

wow lol, I remember so long ago you showd me betas of this ;p

Was beginning to wonder if you droped off the face of the earth

I think you have beat Koops record for procrastination ;p

/downloads

Moonlight Soldier · Post by **Moonlight Soldier** » Fri Apr 20, 2007 1:21 am

Very Cute ^.^