~ Memories ~ (Ai Yori Aoshi & ~Enishi~)
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- Szwagier
- Joined: Sun Jan 04, 2004 9:53 am
- Location: Poland
Wow, really neat stuff, especially since it's your first production.
Good job on synching, and creating flow. You defienietly hear the music, and know how to handle it. And good scene selection provided nice mood and story (I haven't watch the anime, yet I wasn't confused by the scenes). The other girls scenes seemed like a filler though - since you concetrated the story on the two main (?) characters it would be better to stick with them, and cut a bit of audio if you runned out of scenes.
I think you should do less fades to white/black and more fades from scene to scene. And that's because your fades to white/black are a bit rough and too short in many places. Also there was just a bit too much of them (imho)
Another issue are some effects. As people stated before you used a bit too much over-saturation. Also bars at 01:59-02:02 didn't quite fit imho.
All in all, very nice debut,
3.7/5
Good job on synching, and creating flow. You defienietly hear the music, and know how to handle it. And good scene selection provided nice mood and story (I haven't watch the anime, yet I wasn't confused by the scenes). The other girls scenes seemed like a filler though - since you concetrated the story on the two main (?) characters it would be better to stick with them, and cut a bit of audio if you runned out of scenes.
I think you should do less fades to white/black and more fades from scene to scene. And that's because your fades to white/black are a bit rough and too short in many places. Also there was just a bit too much of them (imho)
Another issue are some effects. As people stated before you used a bit too much over-saturation. Also bars at 01:59-02:02 didn't quite fit imho.
All in all, very nice debut,
3.7/5
- Funky-kun
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- Niwa
- Cake Addiction
- Joined: Fri Jul 02, 2004 6:41 pm
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- Full Metal Sempai
- Joined: Thu Mar 17, 2005 8:05 pm
- Location: Athens, Greece
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Great first job man.Looks like this one year and a half were spent well.^^
The quality was very good,the song amazing and the concept,though that of a classic romance,got a different meaning thanks to the clever opening/ending.The editing was also very neat and you used a variety of effects,not just the classical ones.
However,like a lot of people have commented before,you used over-saturation too much making your vid too bright at times.And at 0:09-0:10 the pic that Aoi was holding got a bit red pixelation.
However,the amvwas terrific!!^^
The quality was very good,the song amazing and the concept,though that of a classic romance,got a different meaning thanks to the clever opening/ending.The editing was also very neat and you used a variety of effects,not just the classical ones.
However,like a lot of people have commented before,you used over-saturation too much making your vid too bright at times.And at 0:09-0:10 the pic that Aoi was holding got a bit red pixelation.
However,the amvwas terrific!!^^
- Bakadeshi
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- Joined: Mon Sep 29, 2003 9:49 am
- Location: Atlanta, GA
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- Moonlight Soldier
- girl with bells
- Joined: Thu Jul 03, 2003 1:45 pm
- Status: Plotting
- Location: Canada