I was hoping that you would take a look at this one.

I'm very glad to hear that I've improved a lot, that alone is one of the best comments I could receive.
As for the quality...I was debating whether I should increase the resolution or not, but I didn't think the quality looked good enough, so I left it as it was. In my next Final Fantasy project, I'll focus even more on cleaning up the footage, and working with avisynth filters (this was only the first project that I tried using them) so it will be suitable at a higher resolution.
I was waiting for someone to mention the border effect that I put in during the scene with Atomos. ;D To be honest, I kept feeling like there needed to be something more during that section, so I just threw that effect in. I wish I didn't, though, because I agree with you...it looks out of place. I actually thought the fading in and out from bw to color worked well during the second verse, though...ah, well.
Thank you so much for your constructive criticism, and your positive comments. I appreciate it! ^^