
So yeah, the timing is super slow, but it's a slow song. If I waited for the dramatic hits, though, I'd have three edits. Everything is synced to something, in my head, at least. Usually the bass or drums (which are weak in this song, but there, sort of).
Reviewing, I do notice that the last segment starts syncing action within the cuts rather than the beginnings and endings of cuts, which is kind of a dumb move, but I didn't realize I was doing that. >_< blargh.
Anyway, yeah, I'm a garden-variety suck editor and you really can't expect much. I just spell well. The two things are not related. I wish.

Thanks for the polite teardown, though, that's very helpful.