Kara no Kyoukai: Can you see AMV

Feedback on cataloged Anime Music Videos

Moderators: Mol, seasons

Forum rules
Please observe the following unique rules for this forum:
  • Please limit your new threads (not replies) to one per week. If you have several new videos to announce, create one thread for all the videos. (Note: if you forget one you can edit your post!)
  • Offsite links are allowed, but you are required to have a catalog entry for that video as well. Threads announcing videos that do not contain a catalog entry will be moved to the Awaiting Catalog Entry sub-forum and will be deleted in 2 weeks if an entry is not created.
  • When posting announcements, it is recommended that you include links to the catalog entries (using the video ID) in your post.
  • Videos that do not contain anime are allowed to be announced in the Other Videos section and are not required to have catalog entries.
Locked
User avatar
Ijexis
Joined: Thu Aug 31, 2006 12:53 am
Status: Compliant Model Basis 2.1
Location: Unilateral Matrix 001
Org Profile

Re: Kara no Kyoukai: Can you see AMV

Post by Ijexis » Tue May 19, 2009 8:31 am

Drop me a PM after you've removed the watermark, I'd like to watch but I find my eyes glancing upwards and all over instead of focusing on the vid.

Edit: I decided I might as well watch it, wasn't too fond of the tv-simulator effect you used but overall it was a good watch, slightly random at parts but not bad, keep it up. 3.5/5 (Heh, I'm a sucker for t.A.T.u.)
Image

User avatar
Azure Vermillion
Joined: Tue May 19, 2009 12:17 am
Status: Alive!
Location: Kangaroo Land
Org Profile

Re: Kara no Kyoukai: Can you see AMV

Post by Azure Vermillion » Wed May 20, 2009 12:51 am

「ijexis」 wrote:Drop me a PM after you've removed the watermark, I'd like to watch but I find my eyes glancing upwards and all over instead of focusing on the vid.

Edit: I decided I might as well watch it, wasn't too fond of the tv-simulator effect you used but overall it was a good watch, slightly random at parts but not bad, keep it up. 3.5/5 (Heh, I'm a sucker for t.A.T.u.)
I've reuploaded it as a 'clean version' just so you know^^

The ending isn't ideal and was sort of rushed to completion, (working on and off for 3 months really made me just want to finish the video) Where I couldn't match scenes to the lyrics, I improvised. It's mostly prominent in the beginning of the AMV. Also contributing to the randomness was that I didn't really set out to tell a story, it was just a sync and lyrics relation AMV.
Personally I dislike using the TV simulator too, but I found it the easiest way to sync with the almost static noise in the audio in the sections of the audio
How would you approach syncing to that sound?
Thank you for the feedback, as every little bit helps me improve!

User avatar
OropherZero
Joined: Tue Dec 21, 2004 9:48 pm
Location: Australia
Org Profile

Re: Kara no Kyoukai: Can you see AMV

Post by OropherZero » Wed May 20, 2009 5:32 am

good stuff, now that the watermark is gone, I'd definitely vote this through to the finals in next years VCA 'best first vid' category =)

User avatar
Infinity Squared
Mr. Poopy Pants
Joined: Wed Aug 11, 2004 10:07 pm
Status: Shutting Down
Location: Australia
Contact:
Org Profile

Re: Kara no Kyoukai: Can you see AMV

Post by Infinity Squared » Wed May 20, 2009 6:13 am

Wow, yeah, that was impressive for a first video. I mean, there's some technical flaws (deinterlacing), but overall flow and coherency is up there. Good job mate.
Image

User avatar
Bakadeshi
Abuses Spellcheck
Joined: Mon Sep 29, 2003 9:49 am
Location: Atlanta, GA
Contact:
Org Profile

Re: Kara no Kyoukai: Can you see AMV

Post by Bakadeshi » Wed May 20, 2009 6:54 am

I hope I didn;t spoil something for myself by watching that last scene in your video O_O (have yet to watch beyond the first 2 dvds)

Probably not a "first" video outside of this site, since he/she said they had their stuff stolen in the past, but even still, def good stuff, I enjoyed it. :up:

and thanks for doing the clean version, I def would not have liked watermark, no matter how inconspicuous. (don't even like it on tv broadcast footage.)

User avatar
Azure Vermillion
Joined: Tue May 19, 2009 12:17 am
Status: Alive!
Location: Kangaroo Land
Org Profile

Re: Kara no Kyoukai: Can you see AMV

Post by Azure Vermillion » Wed May 20, 2009 7:18 am

Bakadeshi wrote:I hope I didn;t spoil something for myself by watching that last scene in your video O_O (have yet to watch beyond the first 2 dvds)

Probably not a "first" video outside of this site, since he/she said they had their stuff stolen in the past, but even still, def good stuff, I enjoyed it. :up:

and thanks for doing the clean version, I def would not have liked watermark, no matter how inconspicuous. (don't even like it on tv broadcast footage.)
Ahh gosh, I hope I labeled the video correctly as it has spoilers (orangey-red means it contains spoilers right?)
sorry if it does spoil anything when you eventually watch the other movies, (just don't think of this video when you watch them. That way everything is still a surprise^^)

And just for clarity:
I am male.
This isn't my first AMV. Though I haven't made many. At most around 8 videos and only three of those serious attempts.

User avatar
Ijexis
Joined: Thu Aug 31, 2006 12:53 am
Status: Compliant Model Basis 2.1
Location: Unilateral Matrix 001
Org Profile

Re: Kara no Kyoukai: Can you see AMV

Post by Ijexis » Wed May 20, 2009 9:00 pm

Azure Vermillion wrote:
「ijexis」 wrote:Drop me a PM after you've removed the watermark, I'd like to watch but I find my eyes glancing upwards and all over instead of focusing on the vid.

Edit: I decided I might as well watch it, wasn't too fond of the tv-simulator effect you used but overall it was a good watch, slightly random at parts but not bad, keep it up. 3.5/5 (Heh, I'm a sucker for t.A.T.u.)
I've reuploaded it as a 'clean version' just so you know^^

The ending isn't ideal and was sort of rushed to completion, (working on and off for 3 months really made me just want to finish the video) Where I couldn't match scenes to the lyrics, I improvised. It's mostly prominent in the beginning of the AMV. Also contributing to the randomness was that I didn't really set out to tell a story, it was just a sync and lyrics relation AMV.
Personally I dislike using the TV simulator too, but I found it the easiest way to sync with the almost static noise in the audio in the sections of the audio
How would you approach syncing to that sound?
Thank you for the feedback, as every little bit helps me improve!
Completely understandable, and tad randomness didn't bother me as much, just wanted to point it out. As for the TV Simulator, yea, it's quite the easiest way to go about syncing to audio like that but it's used quite a bit. Especially since when a certain video blew up on the tube, every which way I went, back when I actually watched all the vids sent to me on there, nothing but TV Simulator that I get a bit sick seeing it. As for going about syncing to it, it depends, I don't do effects heavy vids, but as long as it integrates well with the video I suppose. That's just the problem I have with TV Simulator, at times it can seem to be really detached from the vid and doesn't seem to fit well. But that's just my view.
Image

User avatar
Neverend
The cockpuncher
Joined: Tue May 23, 2006 8:05 am
Location: Sweden
Contact:
Org Profile

Re: Kara no Kyoukai: Can you see AMV

Post by Neverend » Thu May 21, 2009 9:31 am

Best first video! <3
Awesome, even though it lacked allot, and those scanlines and some of the chroma keys were really iffy, this is really good for a first video!

User avatar
Azure Vermillion
Joined: Tue May 19, 2009 12:17 am
Status: Alive!
Location: Kangaroo Land
Org Profile

Re: Kara no Kyoukai: Can you see AMV

Post by Azure Vermillion » Sat May 23, 2009 10:35 pm

Neverend wrote:Best first video! <3
Awesome, even though it lacked allot, and those scanlines and some of the chroma keys were really iffy, this is really good for a first video!
Yeah, most of the masking I did toward the end of the video, so it was all rushed. Looking at it now, I did get pretty lazy at the fujino scene - the last mask was really off. I've never used chroma keys before, and not too sure what you mean by scanlines ( I think you are referring to the lines that appear when I pan/crop adjusted some scenes.) nor do I have any clue on how to fix reduce. As they were even present when I didn't compress my video at all.
When you say it lacked alot, how could I have made it more wholesome?
Thank you though, for pointing those things out

User avatar
Infinity Squared
Mr. Poopy Pants
Joined: Wed Aug 11, 2004 10:07 pm
Status: Shutting Down
Location: Australia
Contact:
Org Profile

Re: Kara no Kyoukai: Can you see AMV

Post by Infinity Squared » Sat May 23, 2009 10:57 pm

Hey, those scanlines are to do with the interlacing from the original DVD source. It may pay to have a read at this: http://www.animemusicvideos.org/guides/ ... deo2.htm#1

Should explain some things and further in that tutorial are instructions on how to remove them. Bit of a tricky art, but once you get it right, you'll wonder why you never did it to start with.
Image

Locked

Return to “AMV Announcements & Feedback”