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CrackTheSky
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Unscripted

Post by CrackTheSky » Mon May 11, 2009 5:56 pm

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Probably the only video you'll be seeing from me for a long time. Made it to the finals at ACen, didn't win anything, but I like it anyway. Enjoy!

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Re: Unscripted

Post by Aggressor » Mon May 11, 2009 6:14 pm

That was enjoyable. Definitely better than "another ef AMV" for me. Flawless camera work and the exactly needed amount of shake/noise/brightness correction, I really like this editing style. All I could complain were flapping mouths and not perfect sync in thost fast-scene-change-sequences. 4/5 for me, + high rewatchability (what an ugly word, hehe).
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Re: Unscripted

Post by Mol » Mon May 11, 2009 6:33 pm

that was something fresh, it was pretty enjoyable, though it felt weird when it actually slowed down because there wasn't anything special heh still it was nice watch :up:
Still better than that MMO.
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Re: Unscripted

Post by dreamawake » Mon May 11, 2009 6:42 pm

Hmmm....

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Song I love

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..../get


Can't say I dug this one. The editing was pretty good but the animation didn't work with the atmosphere of the song at all imo. Made it feel pretty stale to me. 3/5 for being well edited tho.
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Re: Unscripted

Post by Dn@ » Mon May 11, 2009 7:43 pm

Diden't like it neither, too many black fades, tv simulator and those film roll lasted too long...
Editing in general had nothing outstanding and i don't know if it's just me but the output quality on the mp4 was not that good for such an HD footage.

2.5/5
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Re: Unscripted

Post by Kariudo » Mon May 11, 2009 8:13 pm

Great editing as always.

I couldn't get over the feeling that the song didn't really compliment ef. Can't really put a finger on what exactly made me feel this way (I hate when that happens)...
The mood and pace that you set up in the first 20 seconds was great, but unfortunately ef isn't overflowing with scenes that would be able to keep that going.

I also thought that the film roll lasted too long.

That said, I don't think this could have been done any better. 4/5
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Re: Unscripted

Post by Ishbalan » Mon May 11, 2009 8:24 pm

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Well done.

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Re: Unscripted

Post by Bakadeshi » Mon May 11, 2009 9:36 pm

great editing. thought this would've done better in drama though, it wasn't very romantic. :up:

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Re: Unscripted

Post by Castor Troy » Mon May 11, 2009 9:55 pm

I liked it, but to be honest, if I saw this on the big screen anywhere, the fast black fade parts would have driven me to blindness. :x

Good stuff, but it's definitely a "monitor" video rather than a "big screen" video. :P
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Re: Unscripted

Post by OropherZero » Mon May 11, 2009 11:18 pm

mixed opinion throughout the vid, it started off with "oh another solid Chihiro x Renji vid 3.5" then went to a "sweet finally someone who actually put Kei and even a bit of Kyousuke in it which other ef vids ignore 4.5" then "wtf is with all this camera movement and film reeling its happening too fast *starts feeling sick and steps away from monitor* 3/5 oh good its over, *moves his chair back in* then finally "solid ending, and I like his faster synch pace on these rapid scene changes nice contrast to other ef vids" so overall 4/5 =O

Nice song too btw.

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