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Elfen Lied Forgotten Memories

Post by BurningLeaves » Wed Jun 13, 2007 2:47 pm




I dont usually post my videos in the announcement forum. But I was really anxious to get some feedback on this one. Im certainly not a great editor, so any one kind enough to download my video, please be for-warned, This is a pretty slow video and it isnt an overly gory Elfen Lied vid, although I love those videos, I went for a different approach anyway thank you for looking :)

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Post by post-it » Wed Jun 13, 2007 9:28 pm

I'm not sure what your soo worrie about -- I liked it. 8-)

simple, direct, she found someone to hold-on to and he did not turn away from her
( according to the Video's used. )

I've never seen this series but if your content is the theme of the series then it is good.

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Post by BurningLeaves » Wed Jun 13, 2007 10:59 pm

post-it wrote:I'm not sure what your soo worrie about -- I liked it. 8-)
Thank you :) im glad someone liked it

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Post by CrackTheSky » Thu Jun 14, 2007 1:34 am

:up: :up: :up:

I downloaded this because I was mildly impressed with your Trust and Betrayal video (may op it at some point, I have a lot to say about it), and I have to say, wow, this is the most different Elfen Lied video I've ever seen. I was shocked to see it be pure romance and sentimentality...and it worked really well with the music. There were a few problems, like the odd transitional frame at the end of a clip, and the quality was sickeningly bad, but the editing was great and the story was clear and concise, and above all unique (for Elfen Lied, at least).

Fantastic work, I really liked it :D

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Post by jade_eyed_angel » Thu Jun 14, 2007 1:51 am

mm... i got it cuz crackerz liked it =P

anyways... yes horrible quality wah
but otherwise it was cute. very pretty and nice music choice, i love the lack of blood and gore and intestines but lucy's bewbs were such a nice touch =p lol
as for editing.. i saw a few orphan frames
like 1:51-1:52 ish on the fade it changed scenes, didn't like that much... and some of your cuts were a but jerky, but it's cool...
actually the only thing that really bothered me was that up until you showed older lucy your story was really clear and it was ncie but after that your scenes were kind of jumbled.. like first you show her naked in the water.. awesome.. then you show her gettin shot.. then you show her dressed with kouta, ionno it's a weird combination, really threw me off. it's like you're hinting something big and important happened, but you're not showing of of it, and only people who have seen the series will get it. if i look at it that way it was kinda lacking.. would have probably been better if you cut those few parts out completely. but putting that aside, as i've seen the anime, it worked out nicely for me. ^^ Makes me wanna watch the series again. =P
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Post by Falconone » Thu Jun 14, 2007 9:12 am

it was really good. So slowly videos are not always bad. and this one was nice. Good emotions, really good work.
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Post by Bakadeshi » Thu Jun 14, 2007 12:44 pm

cute vid. I liked it ^^

I would've definitely taken a bigger file for better quality though.

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Post by Magnus » Thu Jun 14, 2007 3:53 pm

might be intresting, no? /gets

ooooh,,, pretty nice emotion u got there, quality lacks thou, pretty cute video :P

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Post by Koopiskeva » Thu Jun 14, 2007 4:32 pm

that song always gets to me |:>
Hi.

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Post by BurningLeaves » Thu Jun 14, 2007 5:39 pm

jade_eyed_angel wrote:

actually the only thing that really bothered me was that up until you showed older lucy your story was really clear and it was ncie but after that your scenes were kind of jumbled.. like first you show her naked in the water.. awesome.. then youprobably been better if you cut those few parts out completely. but putting that aside, as i've seen the anime, it worked out nicely for me. ^^ Makes me wanna watch the series again. =P
I know exactlly what you mean. I did make this more for the fans of the series rather then showing the story. If I was a better editor (like you guys :) ) I would have prob. been able to do both. Thank you very much for being so descriptive I really appreciate your imput
ZetZu wrote:might be intresting, no? /gets

ooooh,,, pretty nice emotion u got there, quality lacks thou, pretty cute video :P
Thank you for watching it. Im really bad when it comes to encoding But I am slowlly getting better so hopefully, with time ill get some good quality. But thank you for watching a bad quality vid. :)
CrackTheSky wrote::up: :up: :up:

I downloaded this because I was mildly impressed with your Trust and Betrayal video (may op it at some point, I have a lot to say about it), and I have to say, wow, this is the most different Elfen Lied video I've ever seen. I was shocked to see it be pure romance and sentimentality...and it worked really well with the music. There were a few problems, like the odd transitional frame at the end of a clip, and the quality was sickeningly bad, but the editing was great and the story was clear and concise, and above all unique (for Elfen Lied, at least).

Fantastic work, I really liked it :D
Thank you so much. You enjoying it does mean a lot to me because your videos are really fantastic. But now I am curious about what you thought about trust & betrayal, I thought everyone hated that vid haha. Actually... Trust and Betrayal prob. wouldn't have been made without you. Your the one that showed me the links and helped me (in the forum) on how to encode it. So thank you for that, and for this, they both mean a lot to me

thank you all so much for watching it, and telling me what you thought :D :D :D

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