Brothers Fairytale - Sit down and listen my story my friend

[Derudo]

My new vid that i made from beauty anime Tekkonkinkreet and with songs of great band Yoshida Brothers. I took inspiriation from AbsoluteDestiny's vid Storytelling but most of ideas is mine.

I work hard to tell u a fairytale about two brothers as good as i can.

You wanna hear it? Sit down and listen

More info'n'stuff on vid-site.

[Derudo]

tell me ... .tell me please whats wrong with my id that noone even dont look at this amv.. even one comment here "hey man, thats lame, 1/5 star".. geez.. i wanna know whats wrong with something on what to make i spend almost 5 month :/

[-MD]

hehehe, sounds interesting. I'll check it out and comment shortly...I have alot of vids to comment on

Comment: I enjoyed this one a bit. The music was repetitive though >_< But there were some interesting chunks (big chunks). The biggest gripe I had with the vid was...idk scene selection at times..problem is...I really don't know how to explain it...I did see you reused a scene or to but moved it a few frames forward..mainly the money scene somewhere in between 1-2 min mark.

I loved the intro. 2.04-end was very well done (2:13-2:15!! I am easily amused). I'm glad you managed to keep consistant flow while the scenes were moving pretty fast. Over all....it was a nice watch for the morning. A few things here and there but nice. Hope you keep at it ^.^

[AaronAMV]

I REALLY enjoyed that, awesome job.

[Falconone]

oh yeah. that was beautiful, great story and it has a great emotions.
Hope to see more such good videos from you ^_-

[Magnus]

This way it will go quicker to set up the list. Just take the id number from your videos info page's adress.
and put them in between vidid code (see bellow).

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[vidid]163992[/vidid]

I will get this in a few minutes and then come back with thoughts and feedback.

I have mixed feelings about this video. Story and Concept was pretty interesting, editing and visual fx was decent.
There was moments I really liked, examples are 2:26 - 2:30, 2:50 - 3:00.
Those were the only parts that to me sticked out and that really hit the nail on the head mood-wise. Special effects could have been tuned down and touched up, some of them looked really cheesy. As for the text, it could have been spread out more than it was. The text kind of was right up in the viewers face and was hard to read without losing too much focus of the actual video.
All in all a pretty nice video.

Concept were there.
Story were there.
But it lacked atmosphere and mood to most part.

If I would rate this I would rate it around 3/5.


Keep it up, I will look forward on watching yet another release of yours.

- ZetZu

[Vax]

That was really cool. Your story line was smex along with your sync. I really enjoyed this
9/10

[Derudo]

thank you a lot people for comments .. now i know much about what you like in this vid and what mistakes i made in this amv... now i uploading this vid to kero server.. but much people download it from direct link.. thanks .. well.. now i must start making new vid and download more yours vids from a-m-v.org...

im happy that you like my vid

[LuluandAuron]

I liked the sync and mood you created, very captivating.

Only thing was the text, like Zetzu mentioned, at times I had to force my eyes away from the video to read the text. The text helped to tell the story...which I like, but it distracted my attention away from what I was watching.

The moving text at the beginning was easier for me to read without loosing focus