I thought that you did an amazing job with the editing and pacing of the video. The way that you blended the action elements with the music band elements was an interesting effect. And it kept me engaged with the video from beginning to end. However I thought that it made the story a little bit hard to follow at times.
The concept also was pretty cool. After watching this video, I now want to make an Angel Beats video of some kind, after I watch the anime of course.
I also thought that the visual imagery and how it related to the music was really beautiful and it created a pleasing aesthetic that was intoxicating.
Overall I thought that the editing and visual imagery was a very beautiful and amazing experience to watch.
You also made me want to watch the anime too.