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Tormentor
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Do you really know your: Identity?

Post by Tormentor » Sat Oct 15, 2005 10:42 am

Ok guys here it is. My 3rd video which is the first one I used adobe premiere for.

Here some information in short

Anime: Serial Experiments Lain
Song: Am I 1? by Dark Tranquillity

For more information check the comments.
Please leave opinions, so that I get to know what I did wrong and how to increase my skills.
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Re: Do you really know your: Identity?

Post by Tono_Fyr » Sat Oct 15, 2005 11:16 am

Tormentor wrote:Ok guys here it is. My 3rd video which is the first one I used adobe premiere for.

Here some information in short

Anime: Serial Experiments Lain
Song: Am I 1? by Dark Tranquillity

For more information check the comments.
Please leave opinions, so that I get to know what I did wrong and how to increase my skills.
Identity
I'd get it, but it's not on local yet. Go ahead and get it up, and I'll get it when I get back from whereever I'm going. Also, it's <b></b> when you're using HTML (which is what the video information pages use).

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Post by Warheart » Sat Oct 15, 2005 11:21 am

Seems like the video was still in the upload state.

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Post by Ingow » Sat Oct 15, 2005 12:58 pm

I think you overdid it quite a lot with the effects at the beginning. With the duration of the video proceeding it got better and better. The second half was quite enjoyable except for the really weird anime and song combination (because I could never do that to a deep and slow series like this one)

Overall I think that you should go one step back to your Onegai Video and try focusing more on the Originality instead of the effects. I know that Warheart might have forced you to do it the other way but don't do it.

Seriously, don't listen to him :wink:

Now, now, it wasn't really that bad. I'm just joking around here, it could use tweaks at the effects but it's still nice.
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Post by Warheart » Sat Oct 15, 2005 1:02 pm

InGoW wrote:I know that Warheart might have forced you to do it the other way but don't do it.Seriously, don't listen to him :wink:
:roll: :arrow: :x

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Post by yumi+chan » Sat Oct 15, 2005 4:13 pm

Well, it's a nice video overall^^
But I didn't like the much colours in the beginning, that's too colourful for my taste.

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Post by Tormentor » Sun Oct 16, 2005 3:30 am

Thank you everyone. I think all of your statements are right (especially the one of Ingow (to tell the truth I wasn't forced to do this)^^). I guess I shouldn't work that much with effects.

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Post by jethropr » Sun Oct 16, 2005 5:54 am

I enjoyed it for the most part, the colors started to get annoying near the end... but still a good job.

what filter gave you that "particale explosion" thing?

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Post by Tormentor » Sun Oct 16, 2005 8:45 am

I can't believe it. Somebody seemed to like it :shock: .
To answer your question, this "particale explosion" was the scatter effect of premiere with an amount that increase/decreases very fast to/from the maximum level.

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wow

Post by vampire princess » Tue Oct 18, 2005 9:12 pm

hi im so stupid i dont know what im doin. uhhh is that a cat :shock:

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