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Whisper Falls TvSpot/Trailer

Post by Voices_Of_Ryan » Sat Mar 12, 2005 11:46 pm

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Whisper Falls

It's shorter than I've done before.
But.. I think it's the most important one I've done...

On a note not entirely related..
This will be the last trailer or tvspot I'll be doing for a while (if ever).
It's a bit too time consuming for me to continue at this point in life... and I'm just. Not up to the task.
If this is however, my last.

I'd like to thank alot of people who made my dream of doing these possible, you all helped up untill this one wrapped up on production, and I appreciate the never ending support.

Thanks.
- Jacob Lawer

By the way, this doesnt mean I'm retiring from AMVS, just for the most part trailers.
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Post by Voices_Of_Ryan » Sat Mar 12, 2005 11:47 pm

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Post by Coffee 54 » Sat Mar 12, 2005 11:56 pm

Good stuff, you know, I used to have a subscription to Rolling Pocky. Maybe I should renew.

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Post by AMVfreak » Sat Mar 12, 2005 11:58 pm

Short and sweet.
I liked it.

Weak points:
-I couldn't hear what the voices were saying sometimes
-0:37 Whipser Falls.
You spelt it wrong!!! : O


0:05-0:07 Awesome scene.

Solid editing, nice scene selections, and good overall feel.

Good job Ryan. : )
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Post by Voices_Of_Ryan » Sun Mar 13, 2005 12:00 am

AMVfreak wrote:Short and sweet.
I liked it.

Weak points:
-I couldn't hear what the voices were saying sometimes
-0:37 Whipser Falls.
You spelt it wrong!!! : O


0:05-0:07 Awesome scene.

Solid editing, nice scene selections, and good overall feel.

Good job Ryan. : )
I'm sorry...
I was just in a bit of a rush to upload it, and my pc kept on failing on me.

I'm very sorry for the mispelling and I'll try to get another copy uploaded as soon as possible.
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Post by Otohiko » Sun Mar 13, 2005 12:03 am

Heh, it's a lot like the beta you sent me before, plus Helen's voice. Actually, I thought you had the audio quality at somewhat better settings in that beta...

Anyways, you got just what you were aiming for - another original audio bit, if not for some obviously-humorous "reviews" there, it could've been a TV spot for all I know.

I do support your move away from trailers - aside from some minor voice audio quality concerns, you really got them very right in your recent work. I say yo go do something new and unusual. I mean, more unusual than the unusual stuff you already did 8-)
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Post by jasper-isis » Sun Mar 13, 2005 12:13 am

Though I wish that you could've finished this the way you originally wanted to, I still really like this one. The new song worked out pretty well. :)

Feel better soon...
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Post by Scintilla » Sun Mar 13, 2005 12:50 am

Most of the voices needed to be clearer and/or louder. Specifically, in the first line, everything after "flashed" was too low to be easily understood.

The TSF logo was too big, and it looks awkward just sitting there not moving for two seconds... and I wish I had some idea of what was going on in the story.

Also, there's some kind of shimmering that looks like it's from interlacing in the last shot.

But I do like the shot of Ayato and Asahina running down the road followed by the one of Ayato walking down the same road alone...

So is this a sequel to Hallu or not? From the opening scene, it would appear so...
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Post by Voices_Of_Ryan » Sun Mar 13, 2005 12:52 am

Scintilla wrote:So is this a sequel to Hallu or not? From the opening scene, it would appear so...
Take it how you will.
It can be if you want it too.

Doesn't have to be.
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Post by Kragdrim » Sun Mar 13, 2005 1:48 am

good vid , but i find is really short :cry:

0:05-0:07 really beautiful moment

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