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Post by Voices_Of_Ryan » Fri Jun 25, 2004 8:53 pm

Someone told me that they had originaly thought the trailer was made by a real studio for a real movie and just thought I edited the video.

Just incase you don't know if it is or not : P

This was a hand made audio track, with sources from:

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Sean Connery - General - Hunt for Red October
John Travolta - "Good Guy" - Face/Off
??? - "Laughing Girl" - Sailor Moon
President Truman's "War" Speech

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Red Hot Chili Peppers "Under the Bridge"
Rob Dougan
The Day After Tommrow
Misc "Relaxation" Compact Disc's for the Underwater sounds

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Post by Bakadeshi [AuN Studios] » Fri Jun 25, 2004 8:58 pm

Voices_Of_Ryan wrote:

Well, i'm getting better at this pro thing ^_^;; I really worked hard on this and tried to make it to the best of my abilities at the progressive time frames.

Now I know more =) and my next, shall kick all ass.

But as for this one, i'm really glad you enjoyed it, and i think it's a far step up professional wise from my former trailer, so it's a step, step's are step's :)
Well it was more of a nitpick more than a glaring error ;p something to improve on. And apon hearing that the audio was put together to sound like a trailer from the various tracks rather than one you edited from an existing trailer, I have to say you are pretty convincing with it. It sounded like a real trailer, aside from the minor nitpicks. Good job.
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Post by Jebadia » Fri Jun 25, 2004 11:51 pm

Hmmm, it all seemed pretty messy and jumbled around, but it was a nice watch none the less. The audio and all made it rather criptic to figure out, and by the end all I could figure out was some war, values on friendship..and Sean Connery.
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Post by Katsumi_AMVs » Sat Jun 26, 2004 12:25 am

Me downloads :P
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Post by Voices_Of_Ryan » Sat Jun 26, 2004 7:55 am

Jebadia wrote:Hmmm, it all seemed pretty messy and jumbled around, but it was a nice watch none the less. The audio and all made it rather criptic to figure out, and by the end all I could figure out was some war, values on friendship..and Sean Connery.

The point of the video was, that when he was a boy, he was brought up in a time where there was no war, and now after the A-BOMB was dropped (a secound time) he was against the military.

But if you'll notice, no trailers ever REALLY show you what the movies about about.

For example, the lord of the rings trailer implies that you've already read the books to understand the trailers.

Most do that.
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Post by SSJVegita0609 » Sat Jun 26, 2004 10:44 am

I'm gonna get it as soon as my broadband stops being so irritatingly dead. For now I'm stuck on dial up.
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Post by Arigatomina » Sat Jun 26, 2004 12:48 pm

I don't watch trailers very often, but going by 'real' ones, it's interesting. I liked the water shots - the explosions where the music picks up, and the action sync for the rising 'drama' of the 'war.' As far as getting the viewer's attention caught on the 'conflict' of the movie, that soldier does that (the one he's tracking) - the last shot was a nice close, really similar to the sort of closings in real trailers I've seen (tease the viewer, then snap to the title screen so they have to get the movie to find out).

The red scenes (I know that's the anime itself) clashed color-wise, and were hard to make out - I couldn't even tell if there was lip sync in those sections, too dark and blurred (the resolution does that especially). I'd suggest lightening those clips a bit - more brownish gray so the dark doesn't blur around the black outlines of the characters (hiding most of the details). It probably doesn't matter with a high resolution version, but it kills the lip sync in those parts (if there was any), and I tend to expect lip sync in a trailer. Those scenes are my main pet peeve with this.

I'd also add another dissenter for the beginning - the war just felt jumbled, and I didn't connect it with the kids until I read your comments in this thread. In movies, like you mentioned, the viewers have something to go by - there *are* books. But there isn't a book here. It would be like making a trailer for the first 'Aliens' movie and pretending there's a book when there isn't. Some sort of still, text screen could have explained that shift better - I've seen real trailers do that, so you wouldn't have people complaining about the lack of movement for a few seconds (it *being* a trailer, it's allowed to act like one).

But since the most trailers I've seen were real, for movies or anime, I don't think it makes much difference how much of the story you give away - whether or not it makes sense to the viewer. Some trailers are nothing but eyecandy and music, others are like this one with lines from the movie to identify characters and eyecandy mixed in. I think going for the third type would help here - having some text to set the story mixed into the character shots and eyecandy. It's a poor example, but if you've seen the trailer for Earthian, you'll know what sort of text screens I'm talking about - something to give the main 'idea' of the plot to go with the rest.

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Post by Voices_Of_Ryan » Sat Jun 26, 2004 11:04 pm

SSJVegita0609 wrote:I'm gonna get it as soon as my broadband stops being so irritatingly dead. For now I'm stuck on dial up.
I know dialup can be a pain in the ass.


And thank's arigatomyna, I appreciate it :) (the good and bad).
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Post by SSJVegita0609 » Sun Jun 27, 2004 12:14 am

W00t, broadband's back.

Anywho, nice vid, definately one of the better trailer's I've seen lately. I liked the use of overlays at the begining. It's definately an improvement over some of your previous work in terms of experimentation. You're trying out more complex editing styles, which is definately a good thing. Overall, nice work.
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Post by Voices_Of_Ryan » Sun Jun 27, 2004 9:21 am

SSJVegita0609 wrote:W00t, broadband's back.

Anywho, nice vid, definately one of the better trailer's I've seen lately. I liked the use of overlays at the begining. It's definately an improvement over some of your previous work in terms of experimentation. You're trying out more complex editing styles, which is definately a good thing. Overall, nice work.
Wow, thank's alot ^_^
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