Obligatory, annual, elitist AWA 2016 Pro AMV review!
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Re: Obligatory, annual, elitist AWA 2016 Pro AMV review!
stick it to 'em Shin
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Re: Obligatory, annual, elitist AWA 2016 Pro AMV review!
Comments (broken up, because scrolling gets ridiculous):
Videos 020-050
Videos 051-093
Videos 101-143
I may mark out personal favorites with emotes later, but too lazy just now.
There were many fine ducks in a few of these videos. If your video did not feature a duck or duck-like bird, I am not mad. Just disappointed.
Videos 020-050

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There were many fine ducks in a few of these videos. If your video did not feature a duck or duck-like bird, I am not mad. Just disappointed.
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Re: Obligatory, annual, elitist AWA 2016 Pro AMV review!
Not slow... just have issues with these hooves...Rider4Z wrote:you guys are slow

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Re: Obligatory, annual, elitist AWA 2016 Pro AMV review!
Totally copying the emojis idea 
= reallyyyy liked it!
= you get a cupcake for the feels (you either made me weep or laugh)
= absolutely loved it
Ok, let's do this...
020 -
it was a bit slow at times, but the transitions were smooth and I think picking only 3D movies really helped!
028 - well, the song really fits ;D I wish it was bigger so I could understand what the anime is about
037 -
oh my GOD this was super cute and then I learned the footage is only a few minutes, so kudos!
038 - I gotta say, for someone who doesn't really care about Naruto (me), this video got me curious from start to end because you were able to tell a story with it, so good job! I think the music was also a nice combo for this too
039 - it was slowlish at times, for a video about someone like Kenshi it needs more action, though I admit I wasn't able to watch the live action yet, so I don't know if you would even have the material to work with. But some of the "running" parts needed a bit more spice to it, know what I mean?
042 - I'm not sure if it was supposed to be a funny video, it might just not be my thing ;D but the lip sync looked ok
044 -
action with good and smooth transitions, I enjoyed it!
045 - this was especially funny because of the character you used, which is not often used as much. although I think some of the scenes were a bit random, maybe some more of their relationship with Lelouch would make it more 'special'? just a thought!
046 - I wish we could have seen more
050 - I wish you would have made this more... emotional? the song is really pretty and you did use pretty scenes, but they were too slow at times and lacked emotion. I mean, I know some of the scenes are emotional but that's because I watched anime and that's just not enough imo...
051 - lots of hard cuts that didn't really create a smooth transition. i think you can revisit this video and make an ironic version of it, maybe, because the song allows you to do that with this anime
052 -
i simply love this video, it's funny and that's an odd thing to say about ping pong! also, this song was totally stuck in my mind for a whole day after watching this
053 - you started really good, then got a bit lost in the middle with the sync, but then got back to it at the end! I think it would have been better to be shorter, because this was overall really nice!
054 -
cool and nicely done idea! I really dig the internal sync in some of the scenes
060 - the designer in me cringed at the text... I also think the song didn't help me follow your idea much, I'm sorry
062 - congrats, you made me want to listen to this song again ahah. i like how the robot ended it all
063 -
for someone that doesn't care about Batman, this video totally made me feel for him. you were consistent through the entire video and tell a story from beginning to end. the song is a really nice combo and overall, transitions and sync were nicely done
064 - well, she's definitely not an easy girl to deal with! I wish the audio would have better quality...
065 -
you know that scene from Dumbo when he gets drunk? this made me think of it ;D it's really nicely done; 'artistic', I would say
066 -
omg this was even better because you used Clannad and turned the most innocent character into such a creepy one ;D I laughed way too much with this! there were some things, if I want to be picky, but it was funny enough to ignore them ahah
067 - cute, but a bit confusing...? transitions and flow were good!
070 - I enjoyed this, but I couldn't understand who was suppose to "say something" since there's a bit of a lot going on. Overall, it was really pretty and the flow was great
071 -
I can't imagine how hard it was to work with this footage, but you surely created a beautiful video! I never played Zelda, but this totally caught me. It left me with that warm feeling
P.S.: Awesome song choice!
072 -
this was reallyyyy awesome and I might be the only person in the planet that didn't really dig Stranger Things lol
073 - I didn't get this one...
077 - cool, good sync, just think it could have been shorter I guess!
078 -
really well done! audio was very low though? it made me want to watch the anime
079 -
well that was HOT ahah. I really dig the subtle sarcasm and comedy in this
080 -
creepy and smoothly well done. some scenes could use a bit of work, especially the ending that was so... random I guess? but I liked it overall!
081 -
this got better and better as I watched it and I know myself too well to know that I'll be rewatching this one a lot more ahah. Also, it's one of my OTPs, duh. you won me at that! Either way, for romance this is my top choice
082 - cute, but I think it's one of those videos that will mean more for someone who watched the anime
083 - for someone who never watched SPN, I guess this has everything I need to get it, which is a compliment, because otherwise I wouldn't be able to get the story. it felt slow during some parts, especially the chorus
084 -
this was adorable and I loved the editing! the running scene was funny lol. you also made me want to watch the anime, idk if the ending was suppose to do that, but omg is that a plot twist?!?
085 -
dudeeee that was really cool. only complain I have is the girl voice on the guy, but I don't know the anime to know if it even has a girl you could work with on this
087 -
it's so hard to judge this and the other video, it feels unfair too. both are great and well done. the scene choice is so funny! I totally want to watch this anime ahah
088 - I don't know the anime so I don't how helpful this will be... but it all looks like from the same episode? which it didn't help to captivate
089 -
this looks really cool! some scenes the lip sync was spot on!
093 - i hate you a little bit, tiny bit, but still a bit ;_;
101 - i hope this song comes out of my mind soon or things might get awkward
102 - i'm on a diet, so this made me hungry ;( it's cute!
103 -
i still feel bad for this, but this one made me "feel" the video and anime more... both this and 87 are awesome! This one has really nice sync and smooth transitions, I especially like the kids scene walking behind him lol. That made me laugh hard.
104 -
oh my GOD! small story: I totally googled this commercial and linked it to my coworkers, we had a blast!!! seriously, this made me laugh so much. I think you picked the right girl for this and the scenes were so funny ahah!
105 - I'm reallyyyyy sorry, but I couldn't watch it all
sensitive girl here
108 - I didn't get this one ;_; the effects look cool?
109 - bit slowlish. it's funny because the part I enjoyed the most was the middle, where the guy is not singing, but the sync was better and more interesting there
110 - i got it and then i got confused, then i got it and then i got confused again... I dunno if this is one of those cases where I would understand it better if I had watched the anime
111 - i loved the beginning, but then it got sad and it felt... that it didn't fit? i think it would have been fun to add some noise when things go bad and totally change to a different song, idk. you made me sad!!! aww lol kidding! editing was good
112 - i feel trolled lol
113 - i didn't get the story... i think the guy was an asshole, but the girl also went psycho? a bit confusing
114 -
whoa this was emotional and well done
115 - it felt a bit slow in some scenes, but I liked it. the flasback scenes were very well done
117 -
kudos for editing such an old movie! that's really amazing and unique. and I liked it!
118 - from the small knowledge I have about the Marvel universe, the relationship between Suzaku and Rolo feels kinda odd here? I mean, I guess to those who don't know the anime will not be bothered with this, but... I dunno! Some color correction would have helped to make the scenes flow better.
119 -
sync porn basically, but even tho it's Madoka, it's amazing that it can still be this enjoyable ;D
120 -
daww this was cute! i liked the contrast between the two of them
121 - wait, you broke them up??? *super sad face*
123 - no sound
124 - this was very long and since I've been wanting to watch this show, I admit that I stopped when I realized I was getting too spoiled. but from what I saw, I liked it!
125 - some scenes felt too random. i didn't get some of the story. but i like how you tried new things, that was refreshing!
126 - same!
127 - why so violent D: ok but seriously, I didn't get it lol
128 -
super bitter i don't get to play this game because I have a MAC, but i really like this
129 -
fabulous just like them
130 -
i don't think i'll ever get tired of watching videos about Kenshi. i wish the aspect ratio was the right one, but overall that's it
131 - ahah the idea is funny
133 -
this one is memorable and it's the kind of video I wish I could see on the big screen and look around to see how people react to it. imo, it's THE video, if you know what I mean. you know what would be awesome? second version but with just old anime 
134 - lol what
135 - slowish in some parts and i feel like you used the best scenes all at once, so it made the more powerful part bits of the song a bit still
137 - some flip flap and maybe too much fx. just needs to be polished
141 - oh you totally found an awesome combo here lol. I enjoyed this!
142 -
neither the movie or the anime mean anything to me, but this was so great! i liked it a lot! editing was quite cool
143 -
a bit like the video of Ouran Host Club, i'm totally biased on this one because I love the anime. i don't dig the beginning, but i like how it manipulated their story to look more like the manga




Ok, let's do this...
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028 - well, the song really fits ;D I wish it was bigger so I could understand what the anime is about
037 -



038 - I gotta say, for someone who doesn't really care about Naruto (me), this video got me curious from start to end because you were able to tell a story with it, so good job! I think the music was also a nice combo for this too
039 - it was slowlish at times, for a video about someone like Kenshi it needs more action, though I admit I wasn't able to watch the live action yet, so I don't know if you would even have the material to work with. But some of the "running" parts needed a bit more spice to it, know what I mean?
042 - I'm not sure if it was supposed to be a funny video, it might just not be my thing ;D but the lip sync looked ok
044 -

045 - this was especially funny because of the character you used, which is not often used as much. although I think some of the scenes were a bit random, maybe some more of their relationship with Lelouch would make it more 'special'? just a thought!
046 - I wish we could have seen more
050 - I wish you would have made this more... emotional? the song is really pretty and you did use pretty scenes, but they were too slow at times and lacked emotion. I mean, I know some of the scenes are emotional but that's because I watched anime and that's just not enough imo...
051 - lots of hard cuts that didn't really create a smooth transition. i think you can revisit this video and make an ironic version of it, maybe, because the song allows you to do that with this anime
052 -



053 - you started really good, then got a bit lost in the middle with the sync, but then got back to it at the end! I think it would have been better to be shorter, because this was overall really nice!
054 -

060 - the designer in me cringed at the text... I also think the song didn't help me follow your idea much, I'm sorry

062 - congrats, you made me want to listen to this song again ahah. i like how the robot ended it all
063 -


064 - well, she's definitely not an easy girl to deal with! I wish the audio would have better quality...
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066 -


067 - cute, but a bit confusing...? transitions and flow were good!
070 - I enjoyed this, but I couldn't understand who was suppose to "say something" since there's a bit of a lot going on. Overall, it was really pretty and the flow was great
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072 -

073 - I didn't get this one...
077 - cool, good sync, just think it could have been shorter I guess!
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082 - cute, but I think it's one of those videos that will mean more for someone who watched the anime
083 - for someone who never watched SPN, I guess this has everything I need to get it, which is a compliment, because otherwise I wouldn't be able to get the story. it felt slow during some parts, especially the chorus
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087 -

088 - I don't know the anime so I don't how helpful this will be... but it all looks like from the same episode? which it didn't help to captivate
089 -

093 - i hate you a little bit, tiny bit, but still a bit ;_;
101 - i hope this song comes out of my mind soon or things might get awkward
102 - i'm on a diet, so this made me hungry ;( it's cute!
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104 -



105 - I'm reallyyyyy sorry, but I couldn't watch it all

108 - I didn't get this one ;_; the effects look cool?
109 - bit slowlish. it's funny because the part I enjoyed the most was the middle, where the guy is not singing, but the sync was better and more interesting there
110 - i got it and then i got confused, then i got it and then i got confused again... I dunno if this is one of those cases where I would understand it better if I had watched the anime
111 - i loved the beginning, but then it got sad and it felt... that it didn't fit? i think it would have been fun to add some noise when things go bad and totally change to a different song, idk. you made me sad!!! aww lol kidding! editing was good
112 - i feel trolled lol
113 - i didn't get the story... i think the guy was an asshole, but the girl also went psycho? a bit confusing
114 -


115 - it felt a bit slow in some scenes, but I liked it. the flasback scenes were very well done
117 -

118 - from the small knowledge I have about the Marvel universe, the relationship between Suzaku and Rolo feels kinda odd here? I mean, I guess to those who don't know the anime will not be bothered with this, but... I dunno! Some color correction would have helped to make the scenes flow better.
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120 -


121 - wait, you broke them up??? *super sad face*
123 - no sound

124 - this was very long and since I've been wanting to watch this show, I admit that I stopped when I realized I was getting too spoiled. but from what I saw, I liked it!
125 - some scenes felt too random. i didn't get some of the story. but i like how you tried new things, that was refreshing!
126 - same!
127 - why so violent D: ok but seriously, I didn't get it lol
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130 -

131 - ahah the idea is funny
133 -




134 - lol what
135 - slowish in some parts and i feel like you used the best scenes all at once, so it made the more powerful part bits of the song a bit still
137 - some flip flap and maybe too much fx. just needs to be polished
141 - oh you totally found an awesome combo here lol. I enjoyed this!
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Re: Obligatory, annual, elitist AWA 2016 Pro AMV review!
There are so many entries... I didn't get to write 'em properly. There are many of 'em I didn't mention below and don't take it the wrong way, it doesn't mean I didn't enjoy them or something. I'll be updating the list as I watch remaining ones. And Yea there are some of my favorites to which I didn't reply much but I'll once they release it publicly.
Remaining Ones...
133
One Of the Most Memorable AMVs of all time... actually I'm myself working on something similar to this but You did Great and it is so because of the way You put this. You could have end it on a much better point but tht's o.k. What's important is that You showcased all of the emotions in there, maybe except a few and I think it couldn't have been any better technically. Yea the Intensity of the video was something else too.
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Remaining Ones...
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133
One Of the Most Memorable AMVs of all time... actually I'm myself working on something similar to this but You did Great and it is so because of the way You put this. You could have end it on a much better point but tht's o.k. What's important is that You showcased all of the emotions in there, maybe except a few and I think it couldn't have been any better technically. Yea the Intensity of the video was something else too.
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Re: Obligatory, annual, elitist AWA 2016 Pro AMV review!
Here are my notes on the Pro contest this year.
- Videos I liked
- Videos I loved
001 - 060
061-090
091-120
121-150


001 - 060
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Website Administrator, AnimeMusicVideos.Org
Samurai Warriors Productions
Pittsburgh Japanese Culture Society Events - AMV Department Head
Middle Tennessee Anime Convention - Main Events Operations Manager
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Re: Obligatory, annual, elitist AWA 2016 Pro AMV review!


I ended up nitpicking a bit, and the amount I wrote doesn't fully correlate to if I thought the video was good or bad, although I do think I wrote more on videos I thought were above average or better. I hope what I wrote feels constructive when I offer criticism, opinions, or even kinda just stream of conscious analysis. I'd say take it with a grain of salt, but if you're going to get salty about my opinions you probably don't need the extra sodium to begin with.




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020 - I really liked that you kept pretty strict to 3D animation and didn't mix in any 2D stuff. It kept it tight and cohesive in that regards. I think the pacing could have been upped a bit, a lot of scenes kinda linger around for too long, and while you get this clever lyric sync element going on it kind of insists upon itself to the point where its like a "I get it" moment and probably should have intermingled more scenes from a variety of the sources for each particular line to really interplay with a lot more and not just one scene for each line.
028 – The pairing of the source and the song is pretty amusing, but the entire video just seems to rely on that for the entirety and doesn't really grow from there. I did appreciate some of the subtle sync elements, but sometimes it felt too subtle and there wasn't enough of it.
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038 – Its nice to see a Naruto video that’s not just shounen action, but a lot of the visual quality is pretty degraded because of upscaling.
039 – I think the song and show combine nicely, but it seemed like there was something off about the aspect ratio. The beginning and middle felt a lot stronger then the end. The end seemed to drift off a bit and missed hitting a lot of sync and flowing with the lyrics.
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045 – Code Geass seems like a good pairing in general, but I dunno if I'm sold on the characters used and cast in their respective roles. The lip sync could have been a lot tighter in areas.
046 – Never Forget. God Bless Harambe.
050 - This pairing seems like a great idea, but it didn't quite get there in its execution. Scenes linger for too long, and lots of scenes are fairly static without much going on which made it feel under-paced. I liked that it was relatively focused on madoka and homura though.
051 – Similar issues to 50. This one feels a little more refined in some areas, but still could use work on more aggressive cuts and pushing up the pacing and impact.
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053 – The first 18 seconds built up pretty strong, but it didn't really hit it as hard as it should have when the song really kicks in. You have some strong sync every now and then, but they're kinda spaced out in between moments that felt undersynced that really prevented the video from taking off.
054 – Had some solid sync and impact. Ending felt kinda abrupt.
060 – Animation felt stuttery and staggered a lot. Some basic elements needed to be cleaned up just to fix up issues with regards to visual quality.
062 – Domo Arigatou. You told the joke and knew not to overstay the welcome.
063 –


064 – I just couldn't connect with the video. I mean I'm old, but I'm not old enough to relate to these two sources. I realize that this might probably be the best audio quality for the audio source out there, but it was just a huge hurdle to get over.
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066 – I liked the little dango guys, but the other technicals elements weren't really implemented well and stood out really crazy. Although I think it was the point to make them like that to kinda highlight how silly things get, but it kinda lost its charm as the video went on.
067 – Some of the camera stuff felt a little awkward. It opens showing the Harem, but then spends too much time on the snake girl that when the harem showed up again I was like 'oh yeah, that’s a thing' So I think it needed to be more careful with regards to the screentime of the different monster girls to not defocus from the big picture of the harem. Fun scene selection at times. I liked that you used masks to either do the lip sync or remove lip flap, but a few times the edges showed on them.
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073 – Its a lot of shounen sources trying to be funny amvhell/anime crack style but it all felt flat and not all that funny. Sorry :/
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082 – I think it would have been better to focus on the relationship without whatever it was that was going on for no reason. I understand the basic premise of the show, but I don't know what was going on, just like random action with crazy eyed people or something? I guess those things might make sense in the context of the whole show but it felt really disjointed with those random segments that didn't seem to relate to anything and kinda lost a core concept to ground everything. Pacing and beat sync felt good at most parts though.
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088 – Good pairing but is really underpaced and slow visually. Needs more aggressive cutting and syncing to keep it compelling.
089 –

093 - Sure

101 – Someone likes their Hentai from 2013 and 2014.

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105 – It was kinda long and underpaced. I noticed some lyric sync every now and then.
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109 – It was hard for me to get into it. I appreciated the interplay of internal, beat, and lyric sync in the video.
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111 – Audio cut was a little distracting. I think the pairing works at some points.
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117 – This video felt alright. I like the use of older sources, but it feels like it played it a little too safe editing wise. While it gave it consistency in its pacing and felt really clean, it had trouble being really interesting and didn't have as strong an impact it could have had.
118 – Lip sync needed to be tighter. Felt a little loose on the audio syncing.
119 –


120 – I liked how it used soul eater differently. Lip sync was really loose though and I dunno how I feel about the cartooner effect. It kinda felt out of place the first time it showed, but felt more ok by the 2nd time it shows up. Was a cute vid.
121 – I got confused. At first it was building to be a ship between these two and then it just was like no. I feel like the narrative got a little lost to present the concept it wanted attempt.
123 – Too many scenes were really static, I appreciate what it was trying to do, but I dunno if the scenes were available to do what you really wanted to portray.
124 – Editing wise it does some good things, but it feels really long and it wasn't keeping me compelled and engaged in it. I think this might be more appreciated by fans of the series since I gave up on the show somewhere in season 2.
125 – I didn't like the mixing of the old source and new source because there was a quality mismatch. I like how it seemed you were attempting something new effect wise but think it could have been a little more refined. I like the focus on Mustang and those around him and appreciated the lyric sync.
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131 – I get the idea its doing, but it feels kinda lackluster or underpaced. I have mixed feelings on the editor shoutout stuff that showed up in the middle. I think I generally got the inside jokes there, but it kinda just felt thrown in and kinda distracting from what the video had built up as its identity. Maybe if you just threw in a lot of stuff like that everywhere it might have given it the extra boost to its identity and upped the silliness.
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135 – It seems like towards the end it got rushed and suddenly shifts to focus on a particular moment on the train with the girl. I think it had a good idea, but needed more scenes to really show the inner torment of the characters dealing with being a monster and to help the thematic narrative. Sources seem to match well.
137 – A lot of effects were unneccessary and felt just thrown in. The mixed in dialogue and sound effects felt awkward. This video attempts to do a lot of things but I think it needs to take a step back and reevaluate when and why its using effects. I'm not a minimalist, but I think if you're going to be adding effects you need to make them feel natural to both the sources and establish flow, pacing, and style and work from there. Right now it feels a little chaotic.
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