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Overcoming Loneliness [OrgEditor R2]

Post by siny » Sat May 26, 2012 6:35 am

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"Sawako thinks she's a troublesome to her friends, so she wishes to "disappear" from their lifes.
But magic doesn't always work the way you want to... If you ever thought you would be fine without your friends, think again.
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My entry for Project OrgEditor. With so many amazing entries, I really wasn't expecting to be 2nd place.
And since the opinions about the cards varied so much, I decided to upload both versions. I agree with those that said it works both ways, so... :wink:

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A little story about how I did everything (since I've been getting a lot of questions about it and how I did it so "fast"):
Spoiler :
The scenes where people disappeared, I took screenshots and decided to rebuild the scenes in Photoshop. Lots of cloning and playing around with the patch tool. The most complicated scene was the one with a lot of students outside the classrooms. Initially I thought about making them all disappear on those 3 scenes, but 1) it would probably be too fast 2) I wasn't sure if I would be able to finish it on time.

Then there's also a scene with Chizu and Ayane in the bathroom with Sawako. Behind them there are like 3 girls that you would recognize from the first group of students who disappear. Not only it would ruin the mood, but it would also didn't match the story: people around her go away first, then her closest friends and finally Kazehaya. So that scene was redone frame by frame, because it's not a still image.

The scene choice was also a bit tricky... For those that saw the anime will probably understand this better. But the second season helped a lot here, specially that scene with Sawako and Kazehaya outside (I wrote down the episode soon as I figured out the story). Since the beginning I wanted him to be the last one to disappear, just like in Sakura (yes I'm a big fan of it too!) Her classmates disappear really fast, Tomoyo is not so fast and Syaoran stays for a long time next to her. Though this is all because Syaoran too has a few powers, but for my story this happened because of how she feels about each one of them.

Even though we're short on time, having the whole story inside my head helped me a lot. Also, before I even started selecting scenes I just wrote down clips of text with what would happen where. For example, the part where the magic happens was probably one of the first scenes I dragged into Vegas. I usually do this and it helps a lot, I also did it with Watery Symphony with Kai, though with solid colors for each season so each one would have the same "time".

Anyway, the story about the cards was a last minute thing. It might seem complicated, but for me it wasn't for a very simple reason... I used Cinema 4D for that. I did the card and then made instances of it (like duplicating) and made a quick animation of them, always thinking about Sawako in the middle. There's a part where the cards change from Clow cards to Sakura cards, but since everything happens so fast I guess you can't notice that. I work with this software almost every day at work, so all of this didn't take long. The tricky part was to mask the cards and since they turn around her two times (I think it's two times), at least two of them would have to pass behind her. But despite a few usual crashes, everything was cool.

So in the end, I just used the tools I'm most comfortable with: Photoshop and Cinema 4D to make the "magic" happen. Like I said to my friend Anna, Photoshop is probably like a second soul to me lol. Though I do avoid using it at home, because it feels like I'm working, but in the end I always do things that I enjoy so.... And Cinema 4D, I've been working with it for 2 years.

About the song cut, well I didn't do that in the middle of the video. If I have to cut a song I prefer to do it in the beginning so that my story doesn't end up confusing people (and myself lol). I knew those that love the song would notice the "saaaaaaaad" cut, but I'm glad that you only noticed that one! There are actually two song cuts. I had a lot of good reasons for not making the full song: 1) the scenes and who would disappear... I also wanted to make Ryu disappear or Pin or Kurumi, but then... Sawako and Ryu don't have a lot of scenes together and when they do they're happy, Pin is a jerk most of the times and the scenes he has together with Sawako either she's a chibbi character or he sees her as a voodoo doll (or something), Kurumi could fit, but I don't really like her... plus she's mean to Sawako, so even if Sawako likes her... it didn't made sense to me. 2) the chorus repeats sooo many times... I love the song, I really do, but in the end what would I do with a song where the chorus repeats like 3 times? I could do flashbacks and stuff, I thought about that, but it would probably be boring. 3) the slow part of the song in the middle had to be for Kazehaya and no one else lol. So it wasn't me being lazy, because I ended up finishing it way earlier, that was me thinking about a clear and solid story.

The end! :oops:
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Re: Overcoming Loneliness [OrgEditor R2]

Post by Kimberly » Sat May 26, 2012 2:10 pm

When I saw this video, I was like, "Oh, I bet this is siny's." Hehe. I really liked this video, it was one of my favorites in the round. I love what you did with it, the effects and everything. Only one thing bothered me. Yep, I'm gonna say it... The song cuts xD. But it's still a very nice video. The floating cards didn't really bother me as much as everyone else.

I can't wait to see your round 3 video =)
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Re: Overcoming Loneliness [OrgEditor R2]

Post by TritioAFB » Sat May 26, 2012 4:28 pm

I'll be honest with you: I cried with this video. I mean it

But... In the fast parts, I believe it needed more synch, specially at 2:01. It's logical that this segment started slow and then the next segment gets faster, that's understandable, but a little more synched and it could have been perfect.

Saving it to favorites <3
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Post by Shin-AMV » Sat May 26, 2012 4:37 pm

Loved it. <3 Good stuff for the most part.
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Post by Kairih » Sun May 27, 2012 3:49 am

I loved it so much ;_; Really an amazing job!
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Post by Anicsi » Sun May 27, 2012 6:47 am

Hm, well, I already told you this before, but I'll say so for the 100000th time: I LOVE IT SO MUCH!!
I can't believe you did this in only a few days, seriously. Amazing job, so well done! <3

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Post by AimoAio » Sun May 27, 2012 9:05 am

I so don't envy all that repainting you had to do in PS(btw did you mostly use the clone tool? Cause I'm not sure how the patch tool works since I only use the clone one :uhoh: xD ) but it really does make the AMV look incredible! :up:

Apart from those sections I mentioned before in the OrgEditor thread which I think you've already seen (mood at bridge and sync section at 2:05) it's perfect. Great job siny and I look forward to another one of your awesome entries in R3! :mrgreen:

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Re: Overcoming Loneliness [OrgEditor R2]

Post by OropherZero » Mon May 28, 2012 7:03 am

best KnT AMV by far :up:

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Re: Overcoming Loneliness [OrgEditor R2]

Post by siny » Mon May 28, 2012 5:07 pm

Kimberly wrote:When I saw this video, I was like, "Oh, I bet this is siny's." Hehe. I really liked this video, it was one of my favorites in the round. I love what you did with it, the effects and everything. Only one thing bothered me. Yep, I'm gonna say it... The song cuts xD. But it's still a very nice video. The floating cards didn't really bother me as much as everyone else.

I can't wait to see your round 3 video =)
Aw thank you so much! I think it's funny how people can figure out my videos. I have no idea why lol :awesome: Aw and yes the song cuts, gomene! You see... one week is not enough ;p besides like the said I would have to change a bit of the "story"
TritioAFB wrote:I'll be honest with you: I cried with this video. I mean it

But... In the fast parts, I believe it needed more synch, specially at 2:01. It's logical that this segment started slow and then the next segment gets faster, that's understandable, but a little more synched and it could have been perfect.

Saving it to favorites <3
Whoa, really?! That's seriously one of the best comments! I put all my feelings into my videos, so if those make someone feel something I'm really happy! And thank you about the sync, I will keep that in mind!
Shin-AMV wrote:Loved it. <3 Good stuff for the most part.
Would have been awesome if the monters from your video were eating her friends instead of just disappearing! So much more drama! :nose: What am I saying...
Kairih wrote:I loved it so much ;_; Really an amazing job!
Aw thank you Kairih!
Anicsi wrote:Hm, well, I already told you this before, but I'll say so for the 100000th time: I LOVE IT SO MUCH!!
I can't believe you did this in only a few days, seriously. Amazing job, so well done! <3
Ahah and I can't believe how many times you've been calling me crazy since this contest started! And thank you so much for listening to my idea without (most probably) not understanding a word of what I was saying :ying:

AimoAio wrote:I so don't envy all that repainting you had to do in PS(btw did you mostly use the clone tool? Cause I'm not sure how the patch tool works since I only use the clone one :uhoh: xD ) but it really does make the AMV look incredible! :up:

Apart from those sections I mentioned before in the OrgEditor thread which I think you've already seen (mood at bridge and sync section at 2:05) it's perfect. Great job siny and I look forward to another one of your awesome entries in R3! :mrgreen:
Oh but the patch tool does wonders when you have textured places. Clone can be a bit messy, depends on what you're trying to do. And it also gets a bit tedious, so unless you're really patient, most likely it will be noticed. Here's another hint: there were parts were eventually a bit of the texture was lost so I either used a tiny bit of noise or I would make another layer with like a paper texture and multiply. I know the scenes only appear for like a few seconds but these little details help a lot to make everything look more real. Photoshop CS6 has a new great tool called "content aware" (I think it's like this). It's similar to the patch tool, but it's like... you have a tree on the right and you want to move it to the left. Usually this would give you a lot of work, but with this new tool and depending on the background, you just need to select the tree and move it and Photoshop will recognize the background and recreate it :mrgreen:

Anywayyyyyy lol (lesson's over ^^ but I can give you some tips if you want to!) And yes I saw the comments, but I couldn't reply ahah ;p and thank you! Oh and don't expect something great for the next round :/ I've been really busy and tired, and nothing special came to my mind for this round :uhoh:
OropherZero wrote:best KnT AMV by far :up:
Whoa no way! Ahah I could link to you some that are soooo much better! *points to Aimo's video at the top* <3
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