The nature of night

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blaksun
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The nature of night

Post by blaksun » Fri Feb 10, 2012 5:30 pm


My newts amv |:>
More or odder text will probably be add later
Text endless companions so foe raid ones and even less that makes sense :)

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Re: The nature of night

Post by irriadin » Fri Feb 10, 2012 5:52 pm

The introduction definitely piqued my interest. The rest was kinda iffy. Be careful to avoid splitting your clips and leaving a frame or two of extraneous source in there, I noticed a few instances where there were leftovers (1:14, 1:20, 1:33). You did a good job of matching the mood of the song. Pretty good scene selection too. The biggest problem with the video is that the slower portions don't work quite as well as the action-packed ones.

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Re: The nature of night

Post by lloyd9988 » Fri Feb 10, 2012 6:04 pm

irriadin wrote:The introduction definitely piqued my interest. The rest was kinda iffy. Be careful to avoid splitting your clips and leaving a frame or two of extraneous source in there, I noticed a few instances where there were leftovers (1:14, 1:20, 1:33). You did a good job of matching the mood of the song. Pretty good scene selection too. The biggest problem with the video is that the slower portions don't work quite as well as the action-packed ones.
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Since Irriadin already said it, I'll just say that your editing is improving. :up:

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Re: The nature of night

Post by Kireblue » Sun Feb 12, 2012 1:17 am

I feel that you needed to add in some croosfades for the slower parts of the video. The hard cuts that you used kinda hurt the pace of the video during those times.

The action parts were ok, but I wish that you had done something with those really heavy beats. For the most part, you completely ignored them even though they almost demanded to be edited to. But for that reason, I kinda feel that this is a hard song to edit to.

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Re: The nature of night

Post by djk » Sun Feb 12, 2012 8:04 am

Hardcore :up:
A like the melody, but the bass to stand more cuts or accelerating, because he slowed down the music so according to me.
Never give up, had nothing to choose
Feel the rhythm, fuck the blues

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Re: The nature of night

Post by blaksun » Sun Feb 12, 2012 10:16 am

irriadin wrote:The introduction definitely piqued my interest. The rest was kinda iffy. Be careful to avoid splitting your clips and leaving a frame or two of extraneous source in there, I noticed a few instances where there were leftovers (1:14, 1:20, 1:33). You did a good job of matching the mood of the song. Pretty good scene selection too. The biggest problem with the video is that the slower portions don't work quite as well as the action-packed ones.
I meant for 1:33 to be in there but if it woes extraneous source or i meant to lave them in don´t matter. I see wot you saying
Thank you :D
lloyd9988 wrote:
irriadin wrote:The introduction definitely piqued my interest. The rest was kinda iffy. Be careful to avoid splitting your clips and leaving a frame or two of extraneous source in there, I noticed a few instances where there were leftovers (1:14, 1:20, 1:33). You did a good job of matching the mood of the song. Pretty good scene selection too. The biggest problem with the video is that the slower portions don't work quite as well as the action-packed ones.
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Since Irriadin already said it, I'll just say that your editing is improving. :up:

Since you said the same as Irriadin I'll just say Thank you :D
kireblue wrote:I feel that you needed to add in some croosfades for the slower parts of the video. The hard cuts that you used kinda hurt the pace of the video during those times.

The action parts were ok, but I wish that you had done something with those really heavy beats. For the most part, you completely ignored them even though they almost demanded to be edited to. But for that reason, I kinda feel that this is a hard song to edit to.
croosfades way dint i think of that :sweat:
Thank you :D
djk wrote:Hardcore :up:
A like the melody, but the bass to stand more cuts or accelerating, because he slowed down the music so according to me.
sorry i have no idea wot you are saying :?:
Edit: ok :) thank you
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I really appreciate all your comments and i will keep it all in mind :D
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Text endless companions so foe raid ones and even less that makes sense :)

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Re: The nature of night

Post by djk » Sun Feb 12, 2012 1:20 pm

:sweat:
more cuts, more beat
Never give up, had nothing to choose
Feel the rhythm, fuck the blues

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Re: The nature of night

Post by gotegenks » Wed Feb 15, 2012 2:50 am

good contrast in the scene selection. When you started having semi-intense scenes for the slow part i was afraid you wouldn't be able to keep it up if/when it got fast again, but you did by introducing that protagonist and more shooting, so i dug it :up:
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