The nature of night

[blaksun]

My newts amv
More or odder text will probably be add later

[irriadin]

The introduction definitely piqued my interest. The rest was kinda iffy. Be careful to avoid splitting your clips and leaving a frame or two of extraneous source in there, I noticed a few instances where there were leftovers (1:14, 1:20, 1:33). You did a good job of matching the mood of the song. Pretty good scene selection too. The biggest problem with the video is that the slower portions don't work quite as well as the action-packed ones.

[lloyd9988]

The introduction definitely piqued my interest. The rest was kinda iffy. Be careful to avoid splitting your clips and leaving a frame or two of extraneous source in there, I noticed a few instances where there were leftovers (1:14, 1:20, 1:33). You did a good job of matching the mood of the song. Pretty good scene selection too. The biggest problem with the video is that the slower portions don't work quite as well as the action-packed ones.

x2

Since Irriadin already said it, I'll just say that your editing is improving.

[Kireblue]

I feel that you needed to add in some croosfades for the slower parts of the video. The hard cuts that you used kinda hurt the pace of the video during those times.

The action parts were ok, but I wish that you had done something with those really heavy beats. For the most part, you completely ignored them even though they almost demanded to be edited to. But for that reason, I kinda feel that this is a hard song to edit to.

[djk]

Hardcore
A like the melody, but the bass to stand more cuts or accelerating, because he slowed down the music so according to me.

[blaksun]

The introduction definitely piqued my interest. The rest was kinda iffy. Be careful to avoid splitting your clips and leaving a frame or two of extraneous source in there, I noticed a few instances where there were leftovers (1:14, 1:20, 1:33). You did a good job of matching the mood of the song. Pretty good scene selection too. The biggest problem with the video is that the slower portions don't work quite as well as the action-packed ones.

I meant for 1:33 to be in there but if it woes extraneous source or i meant to lave them in don´t matter. I see wot you saying
Thank you

The introduction definitely piqued my interest. The rest was kinda iffy. Be careful to avoid splitting your clips and leaving a frame or two of extraneous source in there, I noticed a few instances where there were leftovers (1:14, 1:20, 1:33). You did a good job of matching the mood of the song. Pretty good scene selection too. The biggest problem with the video is that the slower portions don't work quite as well as the action-packed ones.

x2

Since Irriadin already said it, I'll just say that your editing is improving.

Since you said the same as Irriadin I'll just say Thank you

I feel that you needed to add in some croosfades for the slower parts of the video. The hard cuts that you used kinda hurt the pace of the video during those times.

The action parts were ok, but I wish that you had done something with those really heavy beats. For the most part, you completely ignored them even though they almost demanded to be edited to. But for that reason, I kinda feel that this is a hard song to edit to.

croosfades way dint i think of that
Thank you

Hardcore
A like the melody, but the bass to stand more cuts or accelerating, because he slowed down the music so according to me.

sorry i have no idea wot you are saying
Edit: ok thank you
----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
I really appreciate all your comments and i will keep it all in mind

[djk]

more cuts, more beat

[gotegenks]

good contrast in the scene selection. When you started having semi-intense scenes for the slow part i was afraid you wouldn't be able to keep it up if/when it got fast again, but you did by introducing that protagonist and more shooting, so i dug it