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[vidid]185342[/vidid]
Firstly, thanks for telling me that little html trick. XD It was tedious to manually type it out.CodeZTM wrote:PSSST. You can put your video id in the vid id tags (like so below) and it will type out all the information for you! :3
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Ahem. Now onto the video!
I liked how you experimented with some interesting effects. I wasn't fond of the "reboot/error" screens at the start, or the "scanning" screens towards the end, because they took up a LOT of the screen and hit the footage. Also, some of the text was gramatically incorrect [it's "your" last words, not "you're"].
You did some nice fontwork though. Good font choice, good movement and really nice overlays.
Editing wise, you did ok portraying the story of Bleach. I liked the addition of the manga, because it gives the impression of time passing without having to use a lot of scenery. I think a little more scene selection might have helped your cause [because you skip really far ahead timeline wise at times], because it seems a little crazy at the end.
I did love the ending manga bit though. That was classy. :3
But overall, you did a pretty nice job. Some of the effects just didn't do it for me, and a little confusing plot works here and there, but you've got a solid grasp on some nice techniques. Look forward to seeing more.
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First of all, thank you so much for watching and offering advice!gotegenks wrote:ehh...it almost felt like a mep from how different almost all the effects were and for the most part it was all sectioned out, until towards the end when you started mixing the lineart and the scanner effects, but they didn't go together very well so even that was weird. Some of the effects were pretty cool, but some of em were completely unnecessary, like the typography bit. That didn't seem to have anything at all to do with bleach and just felt like a normal typography thing you see on youtube. and the text on the ground stuff right before the typography bit was unnecessary too. aside from all that, the scanner stuff has been sooooo overdone with bleach that it's not even impressive anymore. Kudos on trying to make it new with the lineart stuff but that ended up making it a little weird looking. you had some pretty nice buildup and scene selection though, and the effects you did (apart from the yellow scanner part) were pretty well composed in and of themselves but the juxtaposition of those different effects and then the mixing of those effects really threw it off. It still managed to be pretty enjoyable, the hard work did shine through. If you toned down the scanner stuff and somehow made the lineart effect and the scanner effect more similar somehow i think this could've been pretty great as far as scanner technoy bleach vids go. 3/5