Gun Smoke

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Gun Smoke

Post by 4t0m 4ura » Tue Aug 16, 2011 10:19 am

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This was VERY fun to make. I hope you enjoy it! :)

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Re: Gun Smoke

Post by LoneSaiyan115 » Tue Aug 16, 2011 10:25 pm

Wow..... That was pretty awesome haha. I never imagined a song like that fitting Death the Kid but it worked perfectly. The flow and sync of the action was great and the lip sync was pretty spot on as well. The only thing that bugged me was the beginning text, and that really isn't a big issue. Just wasn't a fan of the font haha.

In short... Great video

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Re: Gun Smoke

Post by EkaCoralian » Tue Aug 16, 2011 11:55 pm

That was pretty awesome! At first I thought it was a little slow (took a bit to get into the faster-paced portion of the music) but dayum; great lip sync and beats sync!~
Nice work! :up:
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Re: Gun Smoke

Post by AimoAio » Wed Aug 17, 2011 7:19 am

Didn't like the font at the beginning but the lip sync was pretty good and I loved the sync at 1:05. :up:

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Re: Gun Smoke

Post by HalOfBorg » Wed Aug 17, 2011 7:41 am

I liked it and the opening font - both the font (opening made me thin western) and the title had me a bit worried that it would be similar to my soon to be released 'Cowboy', but it's not.

Did the font change in the opening? That seemed to annoy me, loved the rest.
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Re: Gun Smoke

Post by 4t0m 4ura » Thu Aug 18, 2011 3:02 am

Thanks for the complements and criticisms!
Wow, I didn't know font/text matters that much xD I'm curious as to why most of you didn't like the font/text. Is it the font style? The fact that it's there in the first place? Something else?
(opening made me thin western)
That's exactly why I chose that font. It has a western look to it.
Did the font change in the opening?
Yah it did. The only reason being that the western style text is partially transparent and I didn't like the way it looked in some shots.

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Re: Gun Smoke

Post by HalOfBorg » Thu Aug 18, 2011 6:27 am

The presence of the text in the opening worked for me, it was just the change in the font caught my attention, so I was looking AT the font instead of the video. I suppose it reached 'distracting', but only just.
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Re: Gun Smoke

Post by Neverend » Thu Aug 18, 2011 3:31 pm

1:53 was awesome

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