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[Bleach] Airplanes

Post by siny » Mon Sep 13, 2010 7:55 pm

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Finally a new video :P I can't seem to have more time to finish the other ones I'm working for. One of them is really on hold, cause I can't hear the song anymore... :oops:

This was a bithrday gift to someone that really loves Bleach and is a bit unhappy at the moment.
I can't tell if the music fits the anime or not, cause I just started watching it a few days ago (onyl the first episode beh :cry: ) But I'm actually happy with the final result. I tried some new things, but compared to my other videos, this was a fast one (maybe because I dunno the story? lol). I think I spent more time picking the raws, encoding and then rendering the final video to be honest.

Still, I hope you enjoy it and give me some feedback. Critics are more than welcome! :)
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Re: [Bleach] Airplanes

Post by Mkid » Mon Sep 13, 2010 8:07 pm

This video had so much potential.
First off why is everything in black and white, with color Corrector orange.
I LOVED1- 30 (Except you slowed down the clips SOOOOO MUCH!!!!)
You got completely lazy 0:31 -2:18(no lyric sync what do ever, some of the clips did match the mood tho)
2:18 The video did get back to okay(again except with the black and white with color Corrector[orange])
you could have ended it with the a drama pause... but your video ends with a dramatic pause like 5 seconds later.
i think you could have done sooo much better 2/5 :down:
sorry but keep trying :up:
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Re: [Bleach] Airplanes

Post by siny » Mon Sep 13, 2010 8:26 pm

Mkid wrote:This video had so much potential.
First off why is everything in black and white, with color Corrector orange.
I LOVED1- 30 (Except you slowed down the clips SOOOOO MUCH!!!!)
You got completely lazy 0:31 -2:18(no lyric sync what do ever, some of the clips did match the mood tho)
2:18 The video did get back to okay(again except with the black and white with color Corrector[orange])
you could have ended it with the a drama pause... but your video ends with a dramatic pause like 5 seconds later.
i think you could have done sooo much better 2/5 :down:
sorry but keep trying :up:
Thank you for the comment and critics :up:

Well the black and white with orange i would never change, that was my goal from the start and I like it. No special reason to do it, I just like it :P And actually those were not the effects used, but that's another story :wink:

And yes my focus was not the lyrics, I can't really imagine myself doing that without knowing the story of the anime lol. So what I did was to be a bit metaphorical with this song and I think it turn out really well, but probably I'll hate it when someday I finish wathching Bleach :lol:

Not sure what you mean with the "dramatic" pause at the end (that was actually intentional).

Thank you for watching it! :)
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Re: [Bleach] Airplanes

Post by sportsgirl1391 » Tue Sep 14, 2010 1:20 am

This video has alot of potential like the person before commented. But yeah The effects to make it black and white and having the orange idk if you should keep using that and on top of that you had to many effects on top of each especially in certain areas. Like you don't wanna use to many effects layer on top of layer type thing. You wanna have your audience able to focus on one thing. Hopefully you don't take this the wrong way or anything. =/ Just wanted to give some pointers.
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Re: [Bleach] Airplanes

Post by siny » Sun Sep 19, 2010 5:04 pm

sportsgirl1391 wrote:This video has alot of potential like the person before commented. But yeah The effects to make it black and white and having the orange idk if you should keep using that and on top of that you had to many effects on top of each especially in certain areas. Like you don't wanna use to many effects layer on top of layer type thing. You wanna have your audience able to focus on one thing. Hopefully you don't take this the wrong way or anything. =/ Just wanted to give some pointers.
Of course I won't take it the wrong way :wink:
I'll keep every opinion on my mind for my next videos, that's why it's always nice to get some feedback :)
Thanks a lot for watching it!
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Re: [Bleach] Airplanes

Post by Rrezz » Sun Sep 19, 2010 6:00 pm

you can try as hard as you can
but bleach amvs are about sword fights and hardcore music

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Re: [Bleach] Airplanes

Post by CodeZTM » Sun Sep 19, 2010 6:07 pm

I really enjoyed the video in its entirety. I liked the artistic statement that I read into the roance/black/white. The fleshtones and the charactesr with the vividly colored clothing stood out as making them show that they had a life/soul, ect. that probably wasn't the intention of the video, but it's what I read into it. I felt that a few times the coloring could have used more clear cut focus [like with Ichigo, whenever his fair and face are colored orange, but then his chin is b/w].

Watermark in the top right is not acceptable in any sense. Huge distracting factor and ruined a good portion of the video for me. Even though I'm keeping this in my personal collection, I'll be cropping the top of the AMV off before I save it completely. >:/

The plot/story was pretty clear cut. I felt like I was sad to see more focus on Ichigo in the last half than the previous half, and wish we could have seen more characters. And I know that Bleach has PLENTY of characters to focus on. Chad especially. I was distraught to see none of him in this.

Overall, it was a really great AMV by my standards. Thew few technical/editing issues weren't enough to distract me from the concept and the artisti statmeent it made.

That being said, like the other two said before me, this had potential to really be amazing. More work/focus and it would have been a lot better. I still enjoyed it, I'm just saying it could have been stronger.

4.00/5.00

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Re: [Bleach] Airplanes

Post by sportsgirl1391 » Sun Sep 19, 2010 9:02 pm

Rrezz wrote:you can try as hard as you can
but bleach amvs are about sword fights and hardcore music

ummm not really bleach has its moments where its not all about the fighting.
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Re: [Bleach] Airplanes

Post by S.A. Robert » Mon Sep 20, 2010 4:05 pm

Clip impressed, great job, a song from the anime perfectly match. Good job :up:
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Re: [Bleach] Airplanes

Post by siny » Mon Sep 20, 2010 7:16 pm

Thank you all for the feedback! Really means a lot for the future :)

@CodeZTM, lol sorry for the copyright. I always try to put it subtle as possible, but I can understand why on b&w it gets a bit distracting.
About the colours, my goal was just like you said. Give more life to the the characters. And I only saw one episode of Bleach, but for me I always relate it to "orange". But was also a little experience, I really like the result, but being a profissional user of Photoshop and others on real life, I totally agree with you about those issues on coloring (and also other thingys)
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