Fix the sky a little

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Re: Fix the sky a little

Post by CodeZTM » Wed Apr 07, 2010 12:42 pm

I hate it when people ramble about a video's length. Yeah, it was short, but it was also condensed in a form making it fairly entertaining and got its message across. Really, would 3 minutes of JUST that kind of scenery really work well? I think not. I agree with the black space that really didn't add to the horror, and that some of the effects could have been toned down a tad for a more simplistic horrifying feel.

It just really wasn't my personal genre of choice when I watch AMV's, but technically speaking, about a 4ish/5.

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Re: Fix the sky a little

Post by simofc90 » Wed Apr 07, 2010 2:20 pm

This song is just wonderfull, and the video even if it's too short isn't bad! the only thing I didn't like was the font at the end which kicked my eyes
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Re: Fix the sky a little

Post by Eion » Thu Apr 08, 2010 7:02 pm

Knowname wrote:yay! another genesis. Please don't let these see the light of day. Maybe if they were all in an mep together but separately they just feel like some hippy rambling off with some psycho conspiracy. It's like I'm so over effects that I'll just blend some scenes to tripy music and shit out a masterpiece. And what's funnier is that it's pretty much exactly like Niwa-kun's garbage over their. In the end I just do not like these forms of expressions. Sorry.
lolwut? o.o
Niwa wrote: Anyway, the video was pretty good. I don't know about that pitch black sequence at the middle though, it didn't add any extra feeling of the horror. The ending was a bit sudden aswell.

The video was pretty short (oh hai) too , but since it's a birthday thing, I guess it's enough ;p

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Haeresis wrote:Length is something I usually don't care about but the video seemed too short in my opinion. Felt it could have been longer so it could have had a proper climax and ending. The editing was good though and good job overall for trying to do something that wasn't in your comfort zone.
I agree with the all of this :amv: . The black space somewhere in the middle surprised me a bit ... can't say I liked it.

It was okay for a birthday vid :3
Thanks Jacob! :D and yeah about the black space, i guess it was a mistake D:
Code wrote:I hate it when people ramble about a video's length. Yeah, it was short, but it was also condensed in a form making it fairly entertaining and got its message across. Really, would 3 minutes of JUST that kind of scenery really work well? I think not. I agree with the black space that really didn't add to the horror, and that some of the effects could have been toned down a tad for a more simplistic horrifying feel.

It just really wasn't my personal genre of choice when I watch AMV's, but technically speaking, about a 4ish/5.
Thanks code! :)
simofc90 wrote:This song is just wonderfull, and the video even if it's too short isn't bad! the only thing I didn't like was the font at the end which kicked my eyes
Thanks sim! :D

i appreciate all your posts and im glad that you liked the video :)

My next video will be longer! hopefully...

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Re: Fix the sky a little

Post by meleechampion » Thu Apr 08, 2010 9:55 pm

Cool song.

Too much overlay for my tastes though.

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Re: Fix the sky a little

Post by Shinnie04 » Thu Apr 08, 2010 10:15 pm

You already know my opinion but I also have to mention that I agree with some of the others that the ending was a bit too sudden. Oh well twas still nice
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Re: Fix the sky a little

Post by Eion » Tue Apr 13, 2010 8:41 am

Shinnie04 wrote:You already know my opinion but I also have to mention that I agree with some of the others that the ending was a bit too sudden. Oh well twas still nice
Thankiiies :3

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