Ok, wow, for a 100 MB file, that is the WORST video quality have ever seen.
That said, I can pretty much tell you right now that this is never going to make the Top 10%...for one, ALL the effects you used in the video are obvious stock, and none of them are used in a way that helps the video. For all intents and purposes, it seems like they were just thrown in for the hell of it. They don't serve any other purpose besides sync, and look crappy the whole time.
As for sync, well, I suppose I can't complain from a technical standpoint...it was all spot-on. However, I thought the video was WAY oversynched, and none of it surprised me. It was all external, effects-driven sync with no purpose. The video wasn't very smooth as a result, and certain synching methods (such as the flashes on the drum rolls) were just way too predictable to do anything for me.
The concept/story was...okay, I guess. I guess I shouldn't be too critical here, I made a PA video with a similar concept (though entirely different execution), most Paranoia Agent videos kinda boil down to the same thing. It worked well enough, and it was clear enough, but the editing and effects usage just didn't really go together with the concept very well.
Overall...I'd give this a 2/5, but just
barely. You're going to have to refine your style a lot and be a bit more original to get on the Top 10%. This mighta swung it four or five years ago, but today no one's going to notice this one, sorry.
P.S. - You really, REALLY gotta work on compressing your video. 100 MB for a 720x480 video (it's supposed to be widescreen, cut off those letterboxes and make the AR 4:3!) that's 2:35 is about three times as big as it should be. You should definitely
read the guides.