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Eurekaaaaaaa You are the one!

Post by chocomel » Mon Jan 14, 2008 3:44 pm

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Howdy!

Its a drama/romance video which is about Ren and Eureka (the main charakters in the show Eureka SeveN ) liking each other (shocking isnt it ) and it tries to set a happy mood where everything comes togheter!

I hope ya like it and feedback/comments are appreciated!

See ya!

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Post by Kionon » Mon Jan 14, 2008 3:48 pm

Ah. It's done. The beta tester takes virginity.

Definitely noticeably improved.

You still had some very minor interlacing, but the most glaring issues are fixed. I really wish I could have taken a look at the original source footage to determine how best to have adjusted the avs script I gave you. I thought for sure the bobs would have handled it.

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Also, much improved on the lip flap. There are probably still one or two spots I would have cut down more, but that's a relatively minor complaint as well. Perhaps I only notice because I know where the original lip flap was to begin with.

A good, serviceable, classic-style romance vid. A keeper, indeed. :up:
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Post by meleechampion » Mon Jan 14, 2008 4:08 pm

/gets for the e7

---edit---
Well, not my type of video, AT ALL, but I knew it was going to be like that.

I mean, it was good enough, but you didn't really establish any sort of story... just a montage of epic Renton and Eureka scenes. I wasn't really paying attention to the lyrics, but it wasn't obvious you were syncing to that either.

Good, but not great: 3.4/5

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Post by -MD » Mon Jan 14, 2008 4:53 pm

I didn't like the lip sync in the video but other then that nice way to edit the song. I like the sync. Well done. I'll keep this one.

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Post by MioMug » Mon Jan 14, 2008 6:59 pm

Take what Kio said put it into a blender, and remove the chunky bits. Volia!

4/5 :up:

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Post by Kitsuner » Mon Jan 14, 2008 7:10 pm

This is not the Eureka I was hoping for. Granted, I knew it couldn't be, but still.

Colon open-parentheses, man. Colon open-parentheses.
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Post by CrackTheSky » Tue Jan 15, 2008 12:15 am

Eh, I like this video better. It was alright, but as melee already said it basically felt like a really random montage of Renton and Eureka. I'm disappointed, because E7's one of my favorite animes. The editing was alright, some parts were really cool, but others just stunk. You captured the mood of the song pretty well, I'll give you credit for that, and the flow was pretty consistent throughout. You just needed to make it a bit stronger conceptually.

3/5 for effort and quality (video looks great), but you can do better.

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Post by chocomel » Tue Jan 15, 2008 12:24 pm

Kionon wrote:Ah. It's done. The beta tester takes virginity.

Definitely noticeably improved.

You still had some very minor interlacing, but the most glaring issues are fixed. I really wish I could have taken a look at the original source footage to determine how best to have adjusted the avs script I gave you. I thought for sure the bobs would have handled it.

|:

Also, much improved on the lip flap. There are probably still one or two spots I would have cut down more, but that's a relatively minor complaint as well. Perhaps I only notice because I know where the original lip flap was to begin with.

A good, serviceable, classic-style romance vid. A keeper, indeed. :up:
Thank ya ;)
meleechampion wrote:/gets for the e7

---edit---
Well, not my type of video, AT ALL, but I knew it was going to be like that.

I mean, it was good enough, but you didn't really establish any sort of story... just a montage of epic Renton and Eureka scenes. I wasn't really paying attention to the lyrics, but it wasn't obvious you were syncing to that either.

Good, but not great: 3.4/5
Too bad you didnt like it, thanks for giving me 3.4 tough!
Meteor Dragon wrote:I didn't like the lip sync in the video but other then that nice way to edit the song. I like the sync. Well done. I'll keep this one.
didnt try to lip sync anywhere except when he screams it out :P the other was lip flap, thx for keeping my amv!
Arkada wrote:Take what Kio said put it into a blender, and remove the chunky bits. Volia!

4/5 :up:
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Kitsuner wrote:This is not the Eureka I was hoping for. Granted, I knew it couldn't be, but still.

Colon open-parentheses, man. Colon open-parentheses.
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CrackTheSky wrote:Eh, I like this video better. It was alright, but as melee already said it basically felt like a really random montage of Renton and Eureka. I'm disappointed, because E7's one of my favorite animes. The editing was alright, some parts were really cool, but others just stunk. You captured the mood of the song pretty well, I'll give you credit for that, and the flow was pretty consistent throughout. You just needed to make it a bit stronger conceptually.

3/5 for effort and quality (video looks great), but you can do better.
i felt like the song didnt give me that much space to create a story, and my intention was to just show the love relation between them and that they stick togheter and help each other trough difficult circumstances, thanks for the critisme tough, will be remembered for my next amv!

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Post by Megamom » Tue Jan 15, 2008 1:20 pm

CrackTheSky wrote:Eh, I like this video better. It was alright, but as melee already said it basically felt like a really random montage of Renton and Eureka. I'm disappointed, because E7's one of my favorite animes. The editing was alright, some parts were really cool, but others just stunk. You captured the mood of the song pretty well, I'll give you credit for that, and the flow was pretty consistent throughout. You just needed to make it a bit stronger conceptually.

3/5 for effort and quality (video looks great), but you can do better.

Vaya CrackTheSky tiene ranzon!!!.... :shock: ...You are brilliant friend, you have every reason, and we both AMVs, I believe that technically are equal, not only in the concept in the flow of rhythm, :o which have good eye!

Changing, I have never seen E7, but I have said very good things that Anime, the AMV shows the relationship more direct actors, the song helped him, the atmosphere is very well achieved thanks wings fades and transitions, in very sober Overall! :roll:


3/5...bueno!!!
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Post by - Kael » Tue Jan 15, 2008 8:30 pm

It's a very nice video, I spent a good moment, thank you. =)
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