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Post by Megamom » Mon Aug 13, 2007 12:10 pm

For the lovers of Yuri… They enjoy! 8-) In serious people, this is Simoun, it gives an excellent one resùmen of the dramatic and good concept of this series!


Video: <A HREF="http://www.animemusicvideos.org/members ... 5871">Yuri Alazar - Simoun</A>
Anime: Simoun
Song: Not Gonna Get Us
Artist: TaTu



Some commentary!
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Post by Emong » Mon Aug 13, 2007 1:05 pm

I actually downloaded this yesterday, or the day before that.. :roll:

Anyway, your capture of the song was pretty neat. Although, it seriously wasn't an original song choice for a yuri vid~ I liked your story-telling. It was deffinitely the best thing on your vid. Especially the part those girls were both in their own cells or something. It was veeery pretty.

Your sync, however, needs some work. A faster pacing would have been nicer. When the intensity of the song was on you didn't hit all the necessary beats where I thought was needed.. Plahplahplah.. Faster pacing next time?

Overall, I liked it, but it wasn't a keeper for me, even if I'm giving you this rating:

4/5 :up:

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Post by angelx03 » Mon Aug 13, 2007 1:25 pm

Yeah, for a pretty fast-paced song, the cuts and edits ended up being too lethargic. Hell, I thought you're going to use more of the aerial battles which would have helped pick up the speed.

The concept and the storytelling on the other hand were solid enough.
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Post by bobstur » Mon Aug 13, 2007 2:55 pm

checking out

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Post by Megamom » Wed Aug 15, 2007 11:25 am

Domo Arigatou :o
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Post by CrackTheSky » Wed Aug 15, 2007 5:15 pm

The editing in this video is simply top-notch. I didn't have any problems at all with the sync or the flow...both were incredibly solid and the best I've seen from you so far. The lip sync was completely unnecessary and intrusive, I wish you hadn't done it at all. The story was clear...the only thing that really needed work besides lip sync was the visual quality. And I won't be rewatching this much because that is one of the single most annoying songs I have ever heard.

Still, excellent work, I'm surprised you haven't gotten more attention, you're a good editor :up: 5/5

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Post by Seska1973 » Thu Aug 16, 2007 12:53 pm

Hehe, some Simoun fan... (Me,too)*hint* profile.

Btw, Simoun is no Yuri :) is more an Story about "Priestess" drag into War... Thats all.
The only thing that goes as Yuri, is the startup ritual for the "Simoun". They kisses each other to startup the engine...

Yes, i'm a Simoun fan...
What? I'm a normal human being like you!!

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Post by Megamom » Fri Aug 17, 2007 12:42 pm

CrackTheSky wrote:The editing in this video is simply top-notch. I didn't have any problems at all with the sync or the flow...both were incredibly solid and the best I've seen from you so far. The lip sync was completely unnecessary and intrusive, I wish you hadn't done it at all. The story was clear...the only thing that really needed work besides lip sync was the visual quality. And I won't be rewatching this much because that is one of the single most annoying songs I have ever heard.

Still, excellent work, I'm surprised you haven't gotten more attention, you're a good editor :up: 5/5

Thank you very much friend, your commentaries are of much value for my! :o
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Post by CodeZTM » Fri Aug 17, 2007 1:35 pm

Deseo ver!

Excuse the poor Spanish, I'm a little rusty over the summer.

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Post by Seska1973 » Sat Aug 18, 2007 6:02 am

I finally saw your AMV...

Very good Scene selection, if you could have keep the "action" cuts up, like in the first part. Then i could give you a better Note :). But anyway a very good AMV...

I give you 4/5

Una película muy buena
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