Title: The First Battle
Categories: Action
Song: Stone Sour: 30-30-150
Anime: Neon Genesis Evangelion
Size: 61Mb
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The First Video
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- CrackTheSky
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Errr...okay, I thought this video was bad. First, your beat sync needs lots of work. The video didn't have much flow or rhythm to it, at all. Secondly, you need to work on your concept, a LOT. Taking the first two episodes of Eva and basically just rehashing the first battle Shinji ha against an Angel really doesn't cut it in my book. Third, drop the effects until you get better with the above things I mentioned. They all looked horrible, especially the box effects you did. Lastly, the quality was really bad - annoyingly so. If you haven't already, read this thoroughly. Also, try not to use downloaded footage.
Sorry man, I had a hard time sitting through this one. 1/5, but if you work on some things you can make something a lot better.
Sorry man, I had a hard time sitting through this one. 1/5, but if you work on some things you can make something a lot better.