Mass Murderer

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Jnzk
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Post by Jnzk » Sun Jun 03, 2007 3:55 pm

I liked this, wish it would have been a little longer.

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Post by Paul Kievits » Sun Jun 03, 2007 4:03 pm

I'm not sure longer would have made it better. I think you can only uphold the "creepy" atmosphere for so long...

... well that + I only used one F*cking episode of bebop which is extremely limiting as far as footage goes...:P
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Post by Niotex » Tue Jun 05, 2007 2:37 pm

I already gave you my feedback on this and I'm glad you finished it still.

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Post by JCD » Tue Jun 05, 2007 2:42 pm

Yeah, what I said to you. I loved how the room was dead quiet during the video, that is proof enough that you succeded :D

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Post by Esrhan » Tue Jun 05, 2007 3:32 pm

Janzki wrote:I liked this, wish it would have been a little longer.
A little bit longer and a better ending. I was expecting for the video to continue at one point, but suddenly there are ending credits thrown at me. It was like watching the last 10 minutes of Pirates of the Caribbean 2, without realising you're not actually watching it from the beginning and then the end jumps at you rather unexpectedly.

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Post by Paul Kievits » Tue Jun 05, 2007 4:44 pm

Though the end was intentional and I did intentionally make it short (this would not make a good long video). I do think I could have made it a tad longer and made the end a tad more climactic. I think hardly any one grasped that pierrot actually dies in the end. My last video was also short, but it didn't disturb me as much because the end was clear and it felt whole. Though it was short I still think it wasn't really much too short, just a tad perhaps.

JCD: I agree, though I think that also had something to do with the volume of the audio :P
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Post by Douggie » Wed Jun 13, 2007 5:21 am

Paul, love the video, even though after watching it a gazillion time I still don't fully get it (see what's going on though and what's the overall idea - but then again, I only saw the first 10 eps of Cowboy Bebop). I love the interesting style and especially the mood you've created. I thought the credit screen was brilliant!

Maybe the effect was bigger after a comedy vid - because it seems way more creepy (like JCD said - everybody was quiet and probably also going WTF)!

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Post by - Kael » Wed Jun 13, 2007 4:34 pm

Hum, special video, I like it :wink:
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Post by my pony » Wed Jun 13, 2007 6:09 pm

wow....soooooo creepy. I felt like I was at the movie theatres. It seemed so professional. I totally love it.
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Post by Szwagier » Thu Jun 14, 2007 5:20 pm

Good job man, that was short piece of greatness.

Both the mood and idea were awsm. The track you choose was interesting, and addgin greatly to the atmosphere. The editing was also done well.

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