A Promise in the Clouds (Porcupine Tree - Trains)

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A Promise in the Clouds (Porcupine Tree - Trains)

Post by s0matic » Fri May 18, 2007 11:57 pm

http://www.animemusicvideos.org/members ... p?v=143201
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My first video ever, so overall, it was a learning experience for me. No drastic special effects were used (still coming to grips with editing.) Just a plain and simple story-driven drama video, at least in my opinion.

Apologies for using "Beyond the Clouds" as my video footage (it seems to be a popular AMV title.) Though I do promise that I haven't seen any "Beyond the Clouds" AMVs prior to making mine, so any similarity to any other vids is purely coincidental :oops:.

I hope you enjoy it. :)
Last edited by s0matic on Sat May 19, 2007 4:28 pm, edited 1 time in total.

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Re: A "Porcupine Tree - Trains" AMV(Beyond the Clo

Post by Otohiko » Sat May 19, 2007 12:42 am

s0matic wrote: Apologies for using "Beyond the Clouds" as my video footage (it seems to be a popular AMV title.) Though I do promise that I haven't seen any "Beyond the Clouds" AMVs prior to making mine, so any similarity to any other vids is purely coincidental :oops:.
Never heard of anyone complaining over it. The footage is gorgeous, and if you can make a good video to anything, noone's gonna complain. I'm in the final stages of making a video to this movie as we speak. I think that everyone who likes this movie and has drawn some sort of personal connection to it ought to make a video to it :)

And I also happen to be a fan of Porcupine Tree.


Well....

I'm gonna skip the "good for a first video" routine since I really don't believe in that whole thing - but you'll hopefully get a pat on the back for that from others. :P

Otherwise, I thought it was a really nice video; you hit a lot of nice points and while doing little impressive with the editing or technically otherwise, you picked a great song and executed everything adequately, while keeping up really good mood sync. The lyrics were used nicely at times too. I also like how you almost emphasized the whole 'war background' to the movie. Speaking from my currently-over-the-top knowledge of the footage (I've been staring at it for days now), you've used it well - maybe not super-creatively, but well.

So, linear and not exactly remarkable, but very nicely done. If that's where you start then there's only good things ahead of you.

Otherwise, since I love the movie and the song, this is a keeper by default. I'm gonna try to leave an op for it too. So cheers, and never question your footage choice, especially when you have such a (IMHO) strong song/visual combo. :up:
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Re: A "Porcupine Tree - Trains" AMV(Beyond the Clo

Post by s0matic » Sat May 19, 2007 12:58 am

:!:

Thank you for your very honest input. :o

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Post by shaister » Sat May 19, 2007 1:16 am

Here, I'll do it :p
Very good for your first AMV, it glides along smoothly from start to finish.

I don't want to sidetrack your announcement thread, but I'm curious if you've done some other editing prior to making AMVs?

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Post by s0matic » Sat May 19, 2007 1:28 am

shaister wrote:Here, I'll do it :p
Very good for your first AMV, it glides along smoothly from start to finish.

I don't want to sidetrack your announcement thread, but I'm curious if you've done some other editing prior to making AMVs?
I have not, actually. Working on this AMV was my first hands-on experience with working with NLE software or anything similar.

I would say that the most preparation I have done in creating this video was more in the video encoding side of things, far in advance of my actual editing of the footage. "AbsoluteDestiny & ErMaC's Technical Guide" on the site was an immense help, followed it down nearly word for word. I probably found all little technical video details more interesting than the actual video editing at some point last year :P .

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Post by -GfN- » Sat May 19, 2007 4:20 am

yeah, you're definitely welcome with that kind of attitude :)

I shall check this out when I have dsl, mostly because I generally appreciate well-versed newcomers and am quite into porcupine tree :o

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Post by Ingow » Sat May 19, 2007 5:53 am

very nice video for a first one, developed an overall sentimental feeling to it the longer it went on. that's pretty good considering that normally videos get worse over time ;>

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