Neo Tokyo's Ballad

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Neo Tokyo's Ballad

Post by Jorge89 » Tue Oct 02, 2007 3:29 pm

* This was to be the greatest sign in the world, but i couldnt look at it for enough time to copy the link




I think this might be my first annoucment... anyway here is my 3rd video i hope you like to watch it as much as liked doing it, acctualy, i hope you like it a lot more. Nevertheless i expect your feedback (plz), info about the amv its in the video profile.

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Post by Ingow » Tue Oct 02, 2007 6:06 pm

Great song, great anime, great vibes.

You hit the epicness pretty well considering that I normally am at this point very much sick of watching any more Akira videos. But this was actually pretty nice. Your effects sometimes felt a bit oversaturated so that they sometimes made the source look worse instead of better but that didn't happen too often and overall it was a decent watch.

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Post by Jorge89 » Wed Oct 03, 2007 10:32 am

Ingow wrote:Great song, great anime, great vibes.

You hit the epicness pretty well considering that I normally am at this point very much sick of watching any more Akira videos. But this was actually pretty nice. Your effects sometimes felt a bit oversaturated so that they sometimes made the source look worse instead of better but that didn't happen too often and overall it was a decent watch.

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Thank you very much! It's always nice to get feedback like that

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Post by CrackTheSky » Thu Oct 04, 2007 12:48 am

I'm going to be straight - I can't think of a single Akira video I've liked since I watched Beowulf's Keep Breathing - at least, not one that has the same basic theme and tries to evoke the same feelings as that one does. This one falls into that category, and I was honestly just bored by it. I think a big reason I couldn't get into it was because I just didn't like the song at all, but another is your erratic use of random effects, none of which really seem to fit all that well.

The actual editing (less effects) is okay...you got the mood of the music down pretty well, but from a personal perspective I found it hard to really engage myself in this video.

I also have to mention that 40 seconds for an intro is a bit on the lengthy side.

For a third video this is ok, but I think you can do better with your next ones. Just lighten up on the effects and definitely try and tighten the sync up a little.

2/5

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