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Bakadeshi
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Post by Bakadeshi » Sat Feb 10, 2007 8:59 am

That middle chorus with all the action and drama = win :D

Only 1 cut int here bothered me a bit too fast. but good work overall, an excellent Mai tribute.

I don't remember that graveyard sequence at the very end, and I have all the raws and subs released. Did you create that somehow or I just have a bad memory? :P

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Post by Mamo! » Sat Feb 10, 2007 9:02 am

jade_eyed_angel wrote:mmm i'm sooo making a kanon vid at some point...
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But excellent video, I really liked it. Gah I really have to watch this series. >.>

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Post by OropherZero » Sat Feb 10, 2007 9:02 am

its apart of Sayuri's flashback =P

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Post by n4rU » Sat Feb 10, 2007 4:06 pm

Héhé Nice video 8-)
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Post by Infinity Squared » Sat Feb 10, 2007 7:33 pm

Bakadeshi wrote:Did you create that somehow or I just have a bad memory? :P
Bad memory :lol: Yeah, as Oropher said, that was taken from when Sayuri was explaining her background.

To Shino, Reigna, Yue, Jub, Senshi and n4rU, thank you! And to *inverse* I agree that you probably should watch the series first before you watch this. This video doesn't spoil the Mai arc 100% per se, but I think it's still worth seeing that first to better understand some of the more unclear imagery that are represented here.
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Post by - Kael » Sat Feb 10, 2007 9:35 pm

Very interesting job !

I like very much the atmosphere of your vid.

Nice vid, I keep it :wink:
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Post by HorrorPhD » Sun Feb 11, 2007 1:40 am

Stunning. I think I mentioned that before, but I'll say it again...cuz it is. :wink:

You matched the haunting tone of the musical selection very well...this is definitely a keeper. :D
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Post by Falconone » Sun Feb 11, 2007 5:52 am

It looks not bad. great job.
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Post by yumi+chan » Sun Feb 11, 2007 8:37 am

Pretty good video, I really like it a lot ^^ And the song is great anyway :P
And I wanna see the Anime now too ;_;

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Post by Shazzy » Sun Feb 11, 2007 4:18 pm

Good job transitioning to the second half. I was -about- to lose interest, but it changed pace at just the right moment (2:24). Strongest point is that it actually has a developed story arc. Sooo many drama AMVs never emerge past each line of the song, but this video had an end in mind. Also, nice use of hard cuts. You didn't drown your AMV in dissolves! :up:


Bad points...there's a couple of black flickers for the drum beat. Didn't like where they were placed, it seemed sort of random, instead of marking a high point in the video (for example, 0:30). Sometimes the images matched the lyrics as an afterthought...too much anticipation is bad, but waiting too long is also bad (example: "hot blooded woman" *BEAT* legs and sword and miniskirt). It draws a little too much attention to the editing itself. I prefer foreshadowing and simultaneous matching to afterthoughts. Afterthoughts basically make my viewing experience this: hear lyrics, see matching image a second later, make logical conclusion.
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