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Chapter 9 "The Demon Inside"
2005-10-27 21:49:52
(Chapter 9 Is kinda long so plz copy and paste to word to read bigger text, Don’t get a headache reading this :P! For the New comers I have recently been releasing an Anime Script that I have wrote through this journal, check the journal history for the previous chapters.)
Chapter 9 “The Demon Inside”
Setup: The gang is at a bar positioned at an extended corner booth against the wall. They are eating, drinking, and most importantly, having a good time.
Jeff: Man, I wonder if everyone’s first mission was as crazy as ours.
Billy: I doubt it. Code Orange is the 2nd worse rating.
Trig: Basically HQ is lucky were alive.
Crice: Lucky nothing, we were made for those mechs.
Billy: If you ask me Trig is the only one made for his.
<Trig looks up at Billy.>
Trig: <Stares curiously> Why?
Jean: Because whenever there was trouble, its like you were a whole different person and you acted… almost… demonic…
Trig: <Totally shocked at the word> Well… Uh…
Jeff: It’s fine man we just don’t want you to get yourself or your teammates hurt.
Trig: Guys… I have a confession, I don’t remember exactly what happened but I remember my body feeling like it was burning and it was changing shape too. I was just so angry and afraid that something came over me… I remember my vision turning all red and then everything else… well its kind of Hazy.
Jean: You went crazy… You sent the tyrant flying up into the air and made it more holy then a priest… Then I had to stop you from charging at it again, it’s like killing it wasn’t enough for you.
Trig: Very funny… But yeah… I remember it somewhat…
Billy: Well this isn’t getting anywhere and its obviously not a fun topic.
Christie: I know! Let’s dance! A good beat is playing.
(In the middle of the bar is a dance floor with lights, music, artificial smoke, and a sound proof glass wall with a door.)
<Christie gets up and pulls Billy by the arm and goes toward the dance floor door. Billy stumbles along behind her, he looks at everyone then gives a sigh staring at the ground.>
<Trig and Jeff look at each other and burst out laughing.>
<The next second Crice and Jean stand up walk around the booth and grab their arms dragging them along to the dance floor.>
Trig: Guess we disserved that eh Jeff?
Jeff: Yeah, Yeah…
<They all start dancing and jumping around, Jeff shows off some break dancing moves making the girls scream.>
Setup: Trigs driving home partially drunk but still managing. Jean is totally out of it. She passed out in the passenger seat.
Trig: Ugh… I can barely drive… I’ll have to spend the night at her house again today.
<He finishes driving and parks out in the alley. Trig stumbles out of the car and stretches.>
Trig: What a day…
<He begins to walk around to the other side of the car but 2 guys leap out of the darkness and jump him.>
Guy#1: Hold him down! Hold him!
Trig: Let go! What are you doing!?
Guy#2: Ok you can let go I got him!
<One of the guys, the smaller skinnier guy which seemed to be the boss was pacing back and forth in front of Trig while the other bulkier guy was holding Trig’s arms behind his back making him immobile.>
Guy#1: Ok… Were going to give you three chances to tell us where some money is.
Trig: Get lost! <Spits at him.>
<The guy continues pacing in front of Trig for a minute then punches him full force in the stomach. The air inside Trig’s lungs is forced out as he gasps from the pain recovering his breath slowly.>
Guy#1: That was chance number one. Now would you care to answer my question?
Trig: Go… To HELL!
Guy#2: This isn’t getting anywhere. <Notices a head still in the car.> Hey, there’s someone still in the car!
Trig: No! Leave her alone!
Guy#1: Ohhhh… Maybe she will tell us then heh heh heh…
(Quick flashback: It’s the scene with trig walking out of the door and is interrupted by Mike.)
Mike: That girls a keeper Trig, Don’t ever let anything happen to her.
(Flashback ends.)
<Trig suddenly becomes wild with rage, he starts to shake and twitch violently.>
<The guy opens the door, Jean screams as she is pulled out of the car by her hair.>
<At that exact moment of her scream Trig stops shaking. His pupils roll back into his head and his eyes turn black. A fiery red pupil forms at the center as red veins protrude outward from the pupil enflaming his eyes. His jaw also moves outward slightly and his teeth become sharp and much longer then normal. The muscles twitch and reform in his body while his veins bulge outward and turn blue.>
Guy#2: Yo, something is seriously wrong with this guy! His arms just turned as hard as stone!!!
Trig: (Demonic Voice) Leave her alone!
<Trig flips the guy holding him over and throws him against the car leaving a huge dent in the side. He then charges at the guy who had grabbed Jean and punches him square in the stomach. Blood spews out of the mans mouth as he goes flying nonstop into a dumpster thirty or so feet away leaving another dent.>
<Jean looks up to see Trig’s evil eyes while still in a daze from drinking she goes wide eyed then faints.>
<The guy who had been slammed into the car snuck up behind Trig and slashed him diagonally down his back with a serrated knife. Trig lets out a cry of pain then turns around so fast that the guys clothes were winded. The man’s stares eye to eye with Trig then starts screaming while trying to run but Trig catches his leg and whirls him around throwing him over the alley wall. The bone crunching impact and the horrific scream was absolutely horrifying from the guys landing. While Trig was gazing at the wall the other guy was charging at him with a giant metal pipe and nails him straight in the side of the jaw. Blue blood spews violently out of his mouth. Trig regains himself and turns to face the guy. His jaw is offset. Trig, using both of his hands resets his own jaw freaking the guy out so much that he drops the pole and starts running. Trig picks up the pole and throws it like a rocket nailing the guy in the back of the leg making him flip and tumble to a stop. You could see the bone sticking out of his leg while he lay on the ground motionless and apparently unconscious. Trig walks over to Jean and falls to the floor. He reverts back to normal slowly giving short grunts of pain. Trig slowly gathers his thoughts and picks up Jean. He carries her up the steps very slowly stumbling at times due to the loss of so much energy. Trig carries her up the stairs slowly stumbling and losing his balance at times due to the loss of so much blood. The door is opened as trig walks lifelessly inside to her bedroom laying her down softly. He covers her up with the blankets and begins to walk off but loses his balance. He falls to the floor unable to get back up but trying as if his life depended on it but to no prevail.>
Trig: I can’t go any farther… I can’t even move anymore.
<He notices his blood is red now and that the slash on his back is just a giant scar. Blood is still coming out of his mouth as he coughs it up periodically.>
Trig: There’s something different about me… Something inside me that feeds on emotion… It’s blandly obvious to me now… So far I’ve been able to control it to the point of who I attack. I don’t know though, what will happen if I lose all my control… I could end up hurting the ones I want to protect or even quite possibly… Love…
<Trig slowly thinks himself to sleep.>
Chapter 10 “Were Friends, Not Just Teammates”
(Released tomorrow I promice this time!) -
It's not an "Angel" Anime its GUNZ. GIRLZ, AND ROBOTZ WITH A SIDE ORDER OF DEATH.
2005-10-27 02:51:03
I just noticed how many people use fricken "Angel" songs to the anime Burst Angel... It's fuggin ridamndiculous... I'm glad I'm doing something new with the anime or at least I didn’t see any with this kind of style for it. This Anime is basically about guns, girls, and robots.. Not angels... The author of the anime was just using a metaphor calling the main character a death angel. Guess I'll add the spice to this anime with my music instead of a ton of "Angel" related music. Sorry I'll release some script tomorrow been slacking again lately.
-Running off caffeine again- -
Lunch Break...
2005-10-24 15:39:28
Let's see where to start... Oh yeah Walmart decided that having a hurricane stroll through last night and totally stall the stocking and unloading process not bother them. So I came into work today and was asked to help stock and unload. This would have been ok IF I had not done my usual morning workouts... My arms feel like dead limbs. BTW by unloading I mean the really heavy stuff; Big TV's, refrigerators, canned goods, etc... Tch... I'm starting to wish the hurricane had killed me. Oy what am I saying that's a lie... or is it... Blah regardless I will try to release chapter 9 tonight around 9ish since I get off at 8. I still have to work on my Burst Angel AMV as well...
-Through rain, hail, tornadoes, or even hurricanes... WALMART WILL BE THERE!- -
Chapter 8 "Demonic Eyes"
2005-10-24 02:25:06
(I changed the title of chapter 8 because the old one seemed to fit only with the end of this chapter. This title fits a bit better.)
(Another Long chapter please don’t strain your eyes reading all this as it is, It most likely will cause a headache. Just cut and paste on word then enlarge or something. Hope you like it :P)
Chapter 8 “Demonic Eyes”
Setup: They land back at HQ and dock the mechs against the exit ramps. The Lieutenant had been casually waiting for them against the wall.
Lieutenant: Excellent work alpha. I can honestly say I had my doubts. Your level of teamwork is incredible.
Billy: Enough small talk, what’s next?
Lieutenant: The commander is waiting for you guys back in room 32. Report to him immediately.
<They all start walking to room 32 stumbling from time to time losing their coordination.>
Lieutenant: Take it easy guys, after being in the mechs for so long you’ve lost your grip on gravity and realism. If you start feeling light headed or dizzy just sit down and take a break.
<They exit the mech hanger up the elevator and suite out gathering at the other end of the fitting room.>
Crice: I wonder how Nina is doing.
Jean: Yeah I think we should go visit her.
Billy: We should go to room 32 first and find out what the commander wants then stop by Nina.
Trig: You guys go ahead I need to go to the restroom really fast. I’ll catch up to you.
<The four of them head towards the complex elevator as Trig turns some corners and ends up at the restroom.>
Trig: urghh… <losing his balance as he walks in> My head… It’s pounding… What’s… <Starts to fall to the floor but catches himself using the sink.>
Scientist: Kid, hey… Hey are you all right?! Want me to get a medic?
<Trig turns and looks him straight in the eyes. The scientists eyes widen and his face turns pale as he steps back shivering.>
Trig: Wha… What..? What’s wrong?
Scientist: Ahhh… AHHHHH! <He runs out of the bathroom frantically.>
Trig: Wait… .. Help me… Arghh…
<Trig falls to the floor and curls up in pain.>
Trig: Urghh.. My body feels like its on fire.
<Trig eventually faints from the pain.>
Setup: Two men are arguing in a dark room. It is obvious they are arguing cause they are shaking fist at each other and showing hateful facial expressions. There is no audio.
<The man in the white coat is holding some type of shot chemical in his hand.>
<The other man in a military uniform is using threatening body expressions at the man in the white coat.>
<The two argue consistently for a minute or so.>
<Finally the man in the white coat clubs the guy in the army uniform.>
<He next proceeds over to a concealed tube where a new born child has been placed.>
<The hatch opens as the kid shows signs of crying.>
<The man pulls the shot out of his pocket and stares at it hesitantly… His eyes start brimming with tears, he slowly moves the hand holding the shot to the child and injects the blue fluid into its arm. The child‘s crying increases drastically, its eyes turn dark black with the fiery red pupil.>
Mike: Hey.. Heyyy.. Wake up!
Trig: Huh?! What.. What’s going on!?
Mike: Hell if I know! I just walked in and saw you laying on the floor.
Trig: Oh yeah… I was in a lot of pain.. I remember… I remember…
Mike: Don’t worry about it, all though… You should really get those eyes checked out.
Trig: What?
Mike: I gotta get back to Nina see ya later.
Trig: Oh… Right…
<Trig pulls himself together and stands up staring down into the sink. He begins washing his face and lifts his head up, quick glancing at the mirror. He begins to walk away from it but stops dead in his tracks and shows a terrifying shocking expression on his face. He runs back to the mirror and stares dead into it. It reflects him perfectly, from his wet tired face to his black eyes with the fiery red pupil.>
Trig: What the Hell!
<The reflection begins hazing and a ghostly demonic figure begins to outline Trig.>
Trig: Nooo…
<The reflection clears up as it proves that it is still in fact him as that demon.>
Trig: NOOO!
<Trig punches the window. It cracks perfectly in every direction from the center point at which he hit. He runs out of the restroom trying desperately to shield his eyes making it to the elevator. It dings and the door opens as his team members walk out of it and face trig.>
Jean: Where the HELL have you been?!
Trig: Ummm…
Billy: Yeah what’s with you man. You missed the debriefing.
Jeff: We got congratulated and even given a rank increase! We are B level soldiers now!
<Trig un shields his eyes and prepares for the onslaught of questions.>
Crice: So are you coming with us to see Nina?
Trig: Umm.. Yeah..
Crice: Good let’s go.
<They start walking to the intensive care room.>
Jean: <Whispering to Trig> What’s wrong with you?!
Trig: <Whispering> That’s the scary part… I don’t know.
<A label reading “Nina” becomes visible in the hallway. The five of them enter. Mike is sitting by the bed beside her.>
Mike: Glad to see some visitors.
Jean: Where’s the rest of your team?
Mike: They are talking to the commander about this mistake.
Billy: Mistake?
Mike: I’d rather not get into that.
Billy: I see…
Crice: So will she be all right?
Mike: The doctors don’t know yet. They said she should pull through physically.
Crice: What’s that a post to mean?
Mike: Well they said she was under a lot of psychological trauma during the incident. She may lose some or all of her memory. We don’t know and wont be able to find out till she wakes up.
Crice: That’s terrible!
Trig: At least the mission was a success.
<Mike stares at Trig in awe.>
Mike: There’s no success in battle anymore Trig. Sure our objectives were completed but for what costs? The only success on a mission lies in the ability to prevent battle in the first place. HQ is always saying were getting closer and closer to the source. Even if we find the source then what? It’s a virus, it consumes it’s host for energy. How is finding the source going to help.
Trig: I… guess your right…
Jean: We do it because we are humanities last hope. We are what gives people the courage to continue on with their lives day by day. Should we do nothing and accept the end of our existence? NO! <Tears start running down her eyes.> We will fight, and we will fight until we have won or until we have died trying. The ones who have made sacrifices will not have made those in vain! I would gladly sacrifice my life 10 times over to even be one step closer to being rid of the virus!
<The room falls silent for a bit. Jean runs out of the room crying softly.>
Trig: Sorry guys I’ve never seen her vent like this before. I think we should go now.
<Crice, Jeff, and Billy exit the room. Trig while exiting is interrupted by Mike.>
Mike: Don’t be sorry, she proved her point. That girls a keeper Trig, don’t ever let anything happen to her. See you later.
<Trig waves and catches up to the rest of the group standing by the elevator.>
Trig: You ok?
Jean: Yeah, sorry.
Crice: <Sighs> I need a drink…
Billy: There’s a new bar just outside of town, we could go there for celebration.
Trig: Sounds good, I need a drink bad…
Christie: What’s this about going to a bar?
<The group turns to see Christie sitting on the bench a bit away from the elevator. She walks up and looks at Billy.>
Christie: Can I join ya? I’m off work!
Billy: Ummm… Yeah I guess…
<Christie grabs Billy’s arm and smiles at his response.>
Billy: ……
<Billy looks the other way and slaps his forehead with his other hand. Christie is still smiling.>
Jean: Lead the way you two.
<Jean and Crice giggle.>
<They all walk out to the car Billy and Christie leading with Billy beat red sulking the whole way there, Christie kept a hold of his arm. It was almost pitch black outside with the occasional flickering of the dieing parking lot lights. The car in the team alpha designated spot that they had been driving was not there but a new shiny sporty car was in its place. A sign in the window showed: “Congratulations Team Alpha! - HQ”>
Chapter 9 “The Demon Inside”
(Released Tomorrow) -
@Whiteash
2005-10-24 01:33:02
Ummm... That was me that did that rating and gave that QC to you. Unfortunately I didn't see much sync in that AMV. The AMV wasn't correlating with the song at all after the beginning of the AMV. I didn't understand it very well at all. Maybe I shouldn't of done that till I have seen the Anime but still like I said. The song wasn't even going with the Anime from what I saw after the beginning. Sorry to make you so angry lol. Shit happens.
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