- Bleh just a note: 2005-10-07 14:05:42 I changed the name of chapter 2 cuz it didn't seem right with what was going on. By the way for any new people reading, My past posts explain stuff and characters.
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Chapter 2 is now up!
2005-10-07 13:50:06
Chapter 2 “Wake-up Call”
Setup: It’s morning, birds are chirping and the sun is piercing through the windows.
<Trig gives a big yawn while stretching then lifts himself off the couch. Then he stretches while standing making cracking noises.>
Trig: Wow something smells good.
<The aroma of bacon, eggs, and toast filled the room.>
Jean: I decided to make breakfast since I have a guest and today is a big day. Hope your hungry.
Trig: Not yet but I probably will be after a shower.
Jean: Help yourself…
<Trig grabs his clothes and walks into the bathroom for his shower.>
<Jean turns on the T.V. and watches it while she eats. She is already dressed in shorts and a t-shirt.>
Trig: What is this? Some kind of joke? Their aren’t any towels left!
Jean: Woops sorry forgot to take em out of the dryer, hold on.
<Jean dashes over to the dryer for a towel then runs over to the bathroom door.>
<Trig opens the door partially and reaches out for the towel. Jean hands him the towel while blushing.>
Jean: Sorry…
Trig: It’s all right, thanks.
<Jean returns to the T.V.>
<Eventually Trig comes over in just shorts all clean and fixes a plate of food. Then goes and sits next to Jean.>
Trig: Anything special on the News?
Jean: Nah not really.
<Someone knocks on the door.>
<Jean runs up and opens it.>
Crice: Hey! How’s it hangin? <smiles>
Jean: Good, c’mon in! I was just finishing eating.
Crice: Nah, Jeff’s waiting out in the car. You ready?
<Trig walks up beside Jean with a toothbrush in his mouth and still only wearing shorts.>
Trig: Who is it? <said gurglly.>
<Crice’s eyes open wide and her jaw drops as she points at Trig.>
Crice: You! What are you doing here?! <Moves her finger toward Jean.> Jean, how could you!?
Jean: <confused> How could I what?!
Crice: How could you sleep with him!
<Jean looks shocked for a second then busts out laughing while Trig looks wide eyed then walks off to finish changing.>
Jean: It’s not how it looks, I assure you.
Crice: Then what’s going on?
Jean: I just asked him to spend the night that’s all.
Crice: Spend… The night!? <Said in a weird tone.>
Trig: Ok I’m ready. <Walks over beside Jean again.>
Crice: <Starts touching her index fingers together at her finger tips in a way to show her curiosity.> So… You guys didn’t… you know…?
<Jean and Trig turn and look at each other and burst out laughing again.>
Jean: <While still somewhat laughing puts her hand on Crice’s shoulder.> Whew… ok lets go.
<The 3 walk over to Jeff’s car and get in.>
Jeff: Geez what took ya so long??… Wait a sec what’s Trig doing here???
Crice: He “Spent the night” <said in a evil manner> at her house.
Jeff: Whoa Jean, I didn’t know you had it in you…!
<Jean looks at Trig then looks away blushing.>
Trig: We didn’t do anything damn it!
<The car falls silent.>
Trig: Just go pick up Billy before we end up late.
<The car drives around town for a bit and eventually stops near a bus stop.>
<They look over to see Billy who was sitting on the bench. He walks up and gets in the back with Jean and Trig.>
Jeff: What’s up Billy?
Billy: Nothin… Get a move on or we will be late.
<The car drives off and makes its way to a huge complex connected to the end of the huge dome covering the city.>
(City Explanation and Outbreak Explanation: The city is encompassed under one huge dome made of super condensed fiberglass that’s 30 feet thick, nothing gets in or out unless it goes through one of the military complexes. The glass sinks into the ground by 100 feet, this prevents any hostiles from digging under. The military complexes are scrambled throughout the outer walls of the dome. It was found to be necessary for a dome because the virus was contagious from cuts and bruises by the infected individuals.>
Trig: You seem like you know something Billy, does it have to do with our mission?
Billy: Yes, we will be going to a city over in Texas, we will be searching an abandoned research facility for info on the virus. That’s all I know.
Jeff: Borrring…!
Crice: It’s more then enough action for you! <Laughs.>
Jeff: Heyyyyy…!
<The car approaches the big complex and pars in a spot with a sign that reads “Team Alpha”.>
Chapter 3 “Alpha and Beta”
(coming soon later today) - Small text problem.... 2005-10-06 23:29:38 It's true small text is hard to read but you can copy and paste on to something to enlarge it, just thought I'd help anyone out with this annoyance.
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ATTENTION ALL ANIME SCRIPT WRITERS [Friend] [Do you need it?]
2005-10-06 23:25:56
Are their any Anime script writers on this website? I desperately want a script writer buddy. I love to compare story ideas and what not. This is my latest creation.
P.S. Don't steal idea's its just fricken wrong and you know it.
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I will be posting more and more, I have about 50 pages of script on this paper notebook. I am a average typer so I cant type it up in one day so I'll take my time. I will keep posting more and more since I find this to be very interesting to me.
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Characters and Bios
Ryan: (Main character) Nickname is Trig. Born in Colony 13. Parents are both KIA or war victims. He is 22 years old now and a class C soldier. He just joined the military recently. Hair color is as black as midnight. Eyes are light red in color. He’s usually calm and serene about things but has an incomprehensive aura about him. You will find out later in the story.
Jean: Ryan’s friend since childhood. Father is MIA. and mother is a scientist working in the viral research division. Age is 20, long shiny black hair. Joined the military to stay with Ryan. (Has strong feelings for him but chooses to hide it most of the time.) Eyes are light green.
Billy: The strange or weird character of them all. His whole family is KIA or MIA, due to his tragic history he has an emotionally devastated personality. He is the last living brother of three. He has somewhat of a girlfriend named Christie who became a scientist working for Assault Armor research division. He has long spiky brown hair and hazel eyes. His age is unknown to everyone but they guess he is in his low twenties.
Jeff: The mechanic / engineer of the team. Has a funny easy going personality, likes to joke around. Has serious feelings for the next described girl and is usually open about it. Has short spiky blond hair with dark blue eyes. Has a brother that is also in the military. He is 21 years old.
Crice: Pronounced (Crês). Both Parents are alive and well and own a weapons store that the government and personal soldiers may purchase from. She is 21 years old and has a personality that resembles a boys. She’s tough and strong, doesn’t let anyone get the best of her. Has feelings for Jeff but is too much of a Tom Boy to show it. (Unless she is drunk.) Has straight purple hair that dangles a bit below her shoulders. Has light purple eyes.
Explanation
<Text> = Actions by people.
(Text) = Brief explanations of problems, scenes, history, setting, or changes of any of them.
Name: Text = Person speaking and what is being said.
Name: Text <Text> Text = A person is speaking and performs an action during his lines.
Chapter 1 “The Crew”
Setup: They are all at a bar and have been recently told they have all been assigned together as a team with the code name of “Alpha”. Trig is walking up to the bar getting drinks for everyone, while the others are at a table talking. Billy is sitting at the bar alone sipping on a cup of whiskey.
Trig: Yeah, I’d like 4 Margaritas please. Oh wait, Billy, did you want anything?
Billy: …. <Looks over at Trig> No….
Trig: You should at least try to lighten up and have a good time before tomorrow.
<Billy continues sipping his drink and says nothing.>
Trig: Suite yourself.
<Trig walks back to the table with the drinks.>
Jeff: So what did you get us today Trig?
Crice: Bet they are Shirley Temples.
<Group starts laughing.>
Jean: Maybe for you Crice cause you drink to much anyways!
<Group starts laughing again.>
Jeff: It’s ok she’s more fun when she’s drunk.
<Crice gives Jeff the evil eye then starts laughing.>
Trig: Don’t think getting drunk the night before our first mission is a good idea anyways.
<Everyone looks at Trig.>
Trig: … What?!…
Jean: Everyone is trying not to think about it.
Trig: Oh… Sorry…
Crice: It’s ok, lets have a toast for good luck on our first mission. <Looks over to the bar to see if Billy is coming.> Billy that includes you!
<Billy waves his hand over his shoulder in a fashion to signal that he doesn’t care while looking forward calmly holding his glass of whiskey.>
Crice: Fine then!
<Crice holds her glass up in the air then the others follow and they all tap together.>
Jeff: Too the mission!
Trig: Aye.
<Everyone takes a sip while Crice chugs hers.>
Jean: Slow down Crice, your going to get drunk again.
<Crice finishes her glass off.>
Crice: Don’t chu worry none… <Hiccup> … I can hold my liq-<Hiccup>-uor.
<Crice continues to hiccup periodically.>
Jeff: I think I better get Crice home before she gets herself in trouble.
Crice: Trouble? <Throws her arms around Jeff and hiccups.> Only trouble ill be getting in around here is with you.
Trig: Just get her home safe Jeff.
<Trig looks at Jeff piercingly.>
Jeff: What?… Do I look like the kind of person who would take advantage of a girl who’s drunk?
<Trig lifts his right eyebrow at Jeff while he is getting up with Crice still holding him.>
Jeff: <While walking to the door.> Don’t answer that…
<Jeff and Crice exit the bar and drive off in his car towards Crice’s Apartment.>
Jean: So… Hows things going for you?
<Jean is twirling the straw in her drink around.>
Trig: Good I guess, Now that training is over we get more time to relax and talk like we did today.
Jean: Yeah… Hey… You wanna go for a walk?
Trig: Nah I think its time to take you home. It’s already 11:00 and we have to get up early.
Jean: Ok… If you say so.
<They walk out of the bar side by side not saying anything and approach the car.>
(Cars at this time did not have wheels. They floated above the ground with the power of magnetism. Basically the roads were barred around so people don’t walk on them. Roads were made of metal super conductors that were negatively charged, the bottom of cars were positively charged. The way cars were controlled was a system of jets powered by nuclear fuel. Gasoline has been expended for about 80 years. Some genius scientist invented a safe way to use nuclear energy without the risk of a melt down.)
Setup: The two are riding down the lonely highway, only a few other cars on the road. The interior of the car is dark blue and the car is black in color on the exterior. Trig is driving and has a lot on his mind but Jean is trying to talk to him.
Jean: Is something wrong?
Trig: <At first doesn’t realize she had said something then looks over at her to see a questioning face.> Oh… Yeah… Sorry, I was just thinking about tomorrow.
Jean: Yeah, I’m worried about tomorrow to.
Trig: It’s ok, I wont ever let anything happen to you Jean.
Jean: <With her confidence instantly repaired.> So… you want to stay at my place for the night?
Trig: Ummm… <Looks over at Jean who is looking out her window.> Ok sure.
<Jean smiles while looking out the window after hearing his response.>
Trig (Thinking Out loud): Why would she ask me to spend the night there? She hasn’t done that since we were kids. Maybe she just needs someone to help her get through the night.
<The car then takes an exit ramp off the highway and takes a small road to an apartment complex. Trig parks in the back alley.>
(Everyone in the military has housing, food, and other things needed to live paid for by the government. They all so earn a monthly salary.)
Setup: The two are walking up the stairs that lead to Jean’s apartment.
Jean: Thanks for deciding to stay.
Trig: No problem.
<They eventually get to the room, room 121. Jean unlocks and opens the door for Trig.>
Trig: Thanks.
Jean: Yep.
(Trig slowly enters the apartment which is dark and smells like it had just been cleaned. He located the light switch and flips it on. The light in the living room flickers then stays aglow. Infront of Trig is a counter, on the left of him is a small kitchen area, and on the right is a dining table. Against the right wall was a TV stand, table, and a couch set up perfectly. In the back of the living room through a doorway was the bedroom. The bed had pink covers and pillows with a few stuffed animals on top, the typical Girl setup at the time. On the immediate left of the bedroom was a bathroom with a shower stall and further back on the left was a closet.)
Trig: It’s a nice apartment.
Jean: Thanks, make yourself at home. I’m going to go change for bed.
Trig: Ok.
<Jean walks into her room and closes the door to change. Meanwhile Trig changes into some shorts and a white tank top, then he sets up the couch to sleep on.>
<Jean opens her door and says goodnight.>
Trig: Goodnight.
<Trig crawls into a sleeping position on the couch which is now extended outwards and covered with sheets. He slowly falls asleep and begins to dream about random things from his past.>
Setup: Ryan and a tall blond haired woman are sitting in a hospital lounge. there are toys scattered around on the floor.
Little Ryan: Mommy… Where’s Daddy?
<The blond haired woman slowly lifts her head away from her hands. Her face was very watery, she had been crying.>
Little Ryan: Mommy are you ok?
<She then grabs Ryan and hugs him tight.>
Blond Woman: Mommy’s ok she is just so happy for daddy that she is crying.
Little Ryan: Why…?
Blond Woman: Because daddy is moving on to a better place.
Little Ryan: Can we visit him?
Blond Woman: <She starts crying again and grasps him tight.> Some day Ryan… Some day…
<The dream begins to fade and begin at a different time in his past.>
Setup: Ryan is sitting in a chair next to a hospital bed The woman with blond hair is laying on the bed covered in bloody bandages and covers. She has at least 3 IV’s in her. Ryan is about eleven or twelve years old at the time.
Ryan: <Has been crying and still has tears coming out of his eyes.> Mom… Mom… … Mom… Please… I don’t want to lose you to… You are going to make it through this.
(The heart beat / pulse machines are beating unsteadily.)
Ryan: Please mom… Don’t leave me alone. I don’t want to be alone. I hate being alone.
<The pulse machine’s beat starts to increase slowly.>
Nurse One: <Picks up the emergency phone.> Hello, yes, we have a patient with a possible flat line in room 120. Yes please send someone right away.
Ryan: Why mom…? Why? Why did you have to join the military like dad…..? Why couldn’t you just become a scientist?
<The pulse machines beat is now increasing rapidly.>
<A doctor and two more nurses burst into the room.>
Ryan: What’s going on!?? Mom!!
Doctor: Get that kid out of here!
<Two of the nurses grab Ryan’s arms and start to carry him out the door.>
Ryan: No wait! Stop! <Starts putting up a fight.> Mom! Please Mom, No!!!
<The Pulse machine flat lines.>
Ryan: Mommm!!!
Jean: Trig! Trig wake up your having a nightmare!
Trig: <Breathing heavily.> What time is it?
Jean: It’s 3:30, you were yelling for your mom.
Trig: Oh, sorry.
<Jean looks down into Trig’s eyes, they are extremely red and watery, as if he had been crying.>
Jean: You going to be ok? If not, <Pauses for a second.> you can sleep in my room…
Trig: I’ll be all right, thanks though. Besides I don’t want to intrude.
Jean: Ok… See ya in the morning.
<Trig waves in order to signal and “OK”.>
Chapter 2 “Preparations”
(coming soon)
God small text is annoying to read sorry guys and gals :/
- boogiepop phantom.. pfft.. 2005-10-06 22:09:19 What a waste, I had high hopes for this anime but nooo it blows. Just flat out blows. Its a bunch of different storylines of kids going to this school based on a huge storyline or a single plot. That’s the best I can explain it. Ugh what a pain. I'd rather finish my homework then continue watching it. As a matter of fact... I think I will.. >.>
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