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chronosek
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another simple amv

Post by chronosek » Sun Jan 10, 2010 5:34 pm

Hello,
I wanna announce after long break my fast creation (used half of that weekend ;-),
I paired good anime with good music , no other reason ..
And oh yeah , it is a spoiler , if you didn't watch 21-23 episode of Claymore ...


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Re: another simple amv

Post by Radiant_mt » Sun Jan 10, 2010 11:36 pm

Ok that was nice, a good battle story here. just some things i picked up on:

~Fades are to quick at the beginning
~The begining of the video the story or scene selection was a bit rushed, basically same as the fades
~Quality could be a tiny tiny bit better - at 0:49 i can see blurry blocks kind of. i had that on my last vid, a simple script line in Vdub can blemish it out :P
~Lip sync could be a bit better, if that was lip syncing. no offence, the high contrast made it hard to see.
~The pause at 01:43 didnt fit for me.

~At 2:08 to 2:20 the fight could have been cut / i got settled.
~same at
2:25 after the fifth blow it should have been a cut to a different scene. It then continues more after that, and it got to the point where i thought "ok come one"

~where is the intro? lol

But yeah thats it, the ending made me happy :)

nice anime pick to, need to check it out.
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Re: another simple amv

Post by chronosek » Mon Jan 11, 2010 1:30 am

thanks for commenting , it will help me do better next time :-)

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Re: another simple amv

Post by AikiNick » Mon Jan 11, 2010 9:50 am

Not bad. Simple, but good. Not much to say. By the way, it was the title that got me interested :mrgreen:

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Re: another simple amv

Post by Enigma » Mon Jan 11, 2010 9:54 am

Song reminds me of Halo :shock: , But around the video it was pretty cool 3/5.

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