Ok that was nice, a good battle story here. just some things i picked up on:
~Fades are to quick at the beginning
~The begining of the video the story or scene selection was a bit rushed, basically same as the fades
~Quality could be a tiny tiny bit better - at 0:49 i can see blurry blocks kind of. i had that on my last vid, a simple script line in Vdub can blemish it out

~Lip sync could be a bit better, if that was lip syncing. no offence, the high contrast made it hard to see.
~The pause at 01:43 didnt fit for me.
~At 2:08 to 2:20 the fight could have been cut / i got settled.
~same at
2:25 after the fifth blow it should have been a cut to a different scene. It then continues more after that, and it got to the point where i thought "ok come one"
~where is the intro? lol
But yeah thats it, the ending made me happy
nice anime pick to, need to check it out.