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BANG BANG!!!!! ;D

Post by Omikami_Amaterasu » Wed Jul 23, 2008 3:55 am

This is my third AMV - and for a change of scenery after the slow-paced Masika, I present to you three minutes of pure carnage and destruction!!! You want guns? You want explosions? You want sexy girls in bondage gear whipping each other in a strip club? (Disclaimer: That shot is only 2 seconds long :( ) You want to laugh at very bad Engrish? ;) Then you better not miss...
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Post by Autraya » Wed Jul 23, 2008 4:17 am

mwahaha /getz
new banzors in the making :p

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Post by Omikami_Amaterasu » Wed Jul 23, 2008 4:44 am

Thanks! You are the best Autraya! ;P
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Post by saiyan_pride » Wed Jul 23, 2008 9:36 am

it was really good for a 3rd amv. I felt like some scenes lasted a bit too long and could have used some better sync. It sounds like a difficult song to use but overall it turned out good.
3.5/5
oh.. and i wish i could speak English that well.
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Post by Omikami_Amaterasu » Wed Jul 23, 2008 12:04 pm

saiyan_pride wrote:I felt like some scenes lasted a bit too long and could have used some better sync.
...huh? o_o did you stop before 40 seconds? xD
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Post by Kalium » Wed Jul 23, 2008 12:14 pm

I could have done without the intro. The outro works pretty well, but not so much the intro. Together, you've got nearly a minute of fluff in a file that's less than four minutes long.

The early segments of the actual video are good, but it seems to me that you got a little lazy later on. The point that stands out the most to me is right around the two minute mark with the torpedoes and the black flashes. Later, right around 2:50, your editing felt a little sloppy.

Your timing is good. Work on technique.

3.5/5. Good source choice and good grasp of timing and internal synch.

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Post by Goketsu » Wed Jul 23, 2008 6:42 pm

:shock: gets
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the only thing I didn't realy like was the intro
the rest was pretty good syncage wise and the outro was awesome xD
3.5/5 from me
keep it up 8-)
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Post by saiyan_pride » Wed Jul 23, 2008 6:48 pm

Omikami_Amaterasu wrote:
saiyan_pride wrote:I felt like some scenes lasted a bit too long and could have used some better sync.
...huh? o_o did you stop before 40 seconds? xD
no i stopped after 40 seconds
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Post by Phantasmagoriat » Wed Jul 23, 2008 7:34 pm

Yay Action video!

song brings back memories XD

Loved the internal sync. You did a good job once again ;)
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Post by The Origonal Head Hunter » Wed Jul 23, 2008 7:35 pm

Too much Bang, not enough Bang. Good stuff all around.
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Post by rubyeye » Wed Jul 23, 2008 7:36 pm

Well that was cool. Could have done without the engrish scenes, but the more Black Lagoon videos, the better, I say. Pretty basic editing but I liked the ending cuts and it kept momentum with the music.

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Post by Omikami_Amaterasu » Wed Jul 23, 2008 8:32 pm

Thanks for everyone's constructive feedback ^_^ I'll take them all into consideration on my next project! :)

And thank you all for watching!
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Post by MusoukaProductions » Wed Jul 23, 2008 9:55 pm

This AMV made me want to watch Black Lagoon (yes, I'm such an anime noob, only seen like 20 series). Intro definately wasn't really needed but the outro was good stuff. Good work.

4/5

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Post by ScorpionP » Thu Jul 24, 2008 6:54 am

Aside from that redundant intro, it was a pretty fun video =o
Nice job for a 3rd one.
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Post by Kristyrat » Thu Jul 24, 2008 10:18 am

Pretty kickass. Nice solid action with a good core to it. I'll second the comments on the intro/outro, but really, I consider those separate from the video itself, so they didn't bother me all that much.

And yes, as rubyeye said, the more Black Lagoon vids, the better. :up:

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