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by Kalium » Wed Jul 23, 2008 12:14 pm
I could have done without the intro. The outro works pretty well, but not so much the intro. Together, you've got nearly a minute of fluff in a file that's less than four minutes long.
The early segments of the actual video are good, but it seems to me that you got a little lazy later on. The point that stands out the most to me is right around the two minute mark with the torpedoes and the black flashes. Later, right around 2:50, your editing felt a little sloppy.
Your timing is good. Work on technique.
3.5/5. Good source choice and good grasp of timing and internal synch.