1:1 - Seenage Inc's "Take Me Away"

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1:1 - Seenage Inc's "Take Me Away"

Post by ANTDrakko » Mon May 30, 2005 12:31 pm

Video: Ceres, Celestial Legend ("Ayashi no Ceres")
Audio: Avril Lavigne's "Take me Away"
Link: http://www.animemusicvideos.org/members ... hp?v=73805

Well I wasn't sure whether I was actually going to post here, but I might as well give it a shot.

Its pretty much the same as most 1:1 op rules except for one thing:

Constructive Criticism Only

If you like it, please explain what parts in particular that you liked. If you hate it, please tell me about what parts you hated and what you think could have been done to fix it. I really don't want to see stuff like "OMFG you used avril i hate her she is so teh sux0rz!!!!!!1!111!!!XI!!!"

Expect constructive criticism from me as well. I look forward to downloading and oping each video. I hope you like mine, and have fun!

~Seen

[paizuri: Link fixed.]

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Post by Kerydwenn » Mon May 30, 2005 1:21 pm

I've actually started writing an op on it, so might as well do the exchange :) I'm just not sure of whether I can finish it tonight or not - been writing and reading documents for work all day long and my head feels like a drum right now, so I may finish and post it tomorrow only. In any case, I'll let you know when I'm done!

Once I'm done, you can op this one if you wish: http://www.animemusicvideos.org/members ... hp?v=73527 (or any other one in my sig/profile if you don't like its anime/theme, but it's my latest and I could do with more advice on it, that is).

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Post by Kerydwenn » Mon May 30, 2005 4:57 pm

Okay, I managed to finish and post your op tonight. Right now, however, it's past midnight, so I hope it doesn't sound, uhm, written by too tired a mind :oops:...

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