One thing that I do when I'm editing is to minimise distractions... and it's painful because people don't know how much work there goes into removing these elements... there's this thing called 'lip flap' which is the character's mouth moving when there's no words spoken. This vid had A LOT at 1:31 because of the way you speeded it up - there was no way it could be the lyrics. xD I don't know what program you're using, but I'd suggest taking a screenshot of the character's mouth closed, using the crop effect so it just shows the mouth, then put positional keyframes at the beginning and end of that shot so it follows the footage at the same rate. Basically, the mouth won't move.
I think fans of the anime will get a lot out of your vid. ^^
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