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Post by JaddziaDax » Sun Sep 17, 2006 12:26 pm

I'ma grab it O.O

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Post by Shinodude » Sun Sep 17, 2006 1:03 pm

nice job aes been waiting awile to see it completed ^^, very nice job especialy for a first

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Post by Lockstock » Sun Sep 17, 2006 1:10 pm

thats really awesome for a first video aes ^_^

i really liked some parts of it, even though some parts felt a little "un-smooth" :/

awesome first vid though :D
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Post by Warheart » Sun Sep 17, 2006 3:46 pm

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I should really watch Rahxephon, I still have the DVDs and didn't watch it. But you video really had some intense drama and storytelling. But ... sadly that was it the editing didn't really impress me at all. And is it just me or is the image a bit blury ? But yeah still a decent video ;).

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Post by aesling » Mon Sep 18, 2006 2:43 pm

Hehe, thanks for all the nice comments. I feel encouraged to continue making amvs. I know it's by no means anywhere near perfect, but I'm glad people tend to think it wasn't to bad for a first attempt. And now I know alot of the things NOT to do next time I make a video :P
Willen wrote:My only complaint is a weird visual "judder" on some scenes. For example, 0:25 "someone at the bar" and at 3:02 "it's complicated".
Yeah, it was doing that to me too, and I was going to rencode, but I had someone else test it out, and I don't think it did it for them, because they didn't mention it. So basically, I thought it was just me. I guess it doesn't do it everyone?
Warheart wrote:But ... sadly that was it the editing didn't really impress me at all. And is it just me or is the image a bit blury ?
Yeah, the image was a bit blurry. I'm not sure what I did to it to make it that way, since I edited from DVD footage, nor do I know how to fix it. And if you would leave me an op or something telling me what it was about the editing that didn't impress you, that would definitely help me improve for the future. Thanks.
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Post by AMV_4000 » Mon Sep 18, 2006 3:26 pm

[quote="Willen"]At first, I had a hard time getting into the song. That is, until the 1:56 mark. Then, I started to really like where the video was going. On subsequent viewings, I "got" the beginning. :P

My only complaint is a weird visual "judder" on some scenes. For example, 0:25 "someone at the bar" and at 3:02 "it's complicated".

Oh, and where are the aeslingtangles™??? :?: :?: Rahxephon + Imogen Heap demands some sort of -tangle or polyhedron!!! :|[quote]


addy demands trianglulated videos by teh aes... a decent first video... still needs work, but i think you'll get it soon enough...

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Post by Bakadeshi » Mon Sep 18, 2006 9:27 pm

Pretty nice video, especially for a first. I liked it. There were a couple places where I thought "It wouldve been neet if the creator had done this" technical stuff, like the shot at 02:33 if you couldve masked that out to only apear between his fingers, but all that will come with practice. Excellent work coreographically though, I got drawn into its story the more it went on.

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Post by Warheart » Thu Sep 21, 2006 6:39 am

Ok, your opinion is finished and up'd now. ;)

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