Death Note - O fortuna (My first AMV)

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Beluxy
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Death Note - O fortuna (My first AMV)

Post by Beluxy » Wed May 02, 2007 8:53 am

Video: Kira's world
Anime: Death Note
Song: O fortuna imperatrix mundi
Artist: Carmina Bourana
Creator:Beluxy


Hello people!!

I'm a new user ^^. This is the first Amv I've created and it's about Kira. I hope like it and give comments, please :D .

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Post by aesling » Wed May 02, 2007 2:22 pm

Not too bad, especially for a first amv. The sync was pretty good, and you did well in going with the mood of the music. The visual quality could use some work, and the in the future, disable any divx logos. The guides here can probably help you with those: http://www.animemusicvideos.org/guides/

Also, I would recommend not using scenes from the opening/closings that have text in them.
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Post by Dark Confusion » Sat May 05, 2007 12:52 pm

Aside from the DivX logo and the OP/ED sequences with text on them; I didn't really enjoy the vid.

Since its your first, I have understanding. But for future references; synch it more. A lot more. So many missed opportunities :/

And if you're unsure how to synch; watch other people's amvs and think about what they did that was good/bad.

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Post by Beluxy » Sat May 19, 2007 9:00 am

Thanks a lot for your comments. I tried to do better.

Sorry for my english ^^U. I'm Spanish.

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Post by Scintilla » Sat May 19, 2007 9:16 am

So is it just "O fortuna" or all of "Fortuna imperatrix mundi"? :P
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