Ergo Sum

FinalResolve · Post by **FinalResolve** » Thu May 03, 2007 1:53 pm

Check it out

Kaxi · Post by **Kaxi** » Thu May 03, 2007 2:02 pm

Pretty cool editing!

atis · Post by **atis** » Thu May 03, 2007 2:04 pm

I hate this anime, but this amv is cool. it's very short, but really good editing.
I hope, you continue this amv.

EDIT: Why can't make a first post? 'Couse someone made a post, while I wrote, my own

(in the elementary school, I was always the worst in english

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-Reda- · Post by **-Reda-** » Thu May 03, 2007 3:15 pm

Hmm...I think you could have ended it on a smoother note. Maybe fade out the song and video or something...this basically just stops, so its painfully obvious that its unfinished. Video quality was pretty sharp though, kudos for that...just...kinda wish you would have finished it, it showed great potential

3/5 for uploading unfinished work

FinalResolve · Post by **FinalResolve** » Thu May 03, 2007 3:39 pm

Kaxi wrote:Pretty cool editing!

Thanks!

I hate this anime, but this amv is cool. it's very short, but really good editing.
I hope, you continue this amv.

Thanks! I won't complete it though.

Hmm...I think you could have ended it on a smoother note. Maybe fade out the song and video or something...this basically just stops, so its painfully obvious that its unfinished. Video quality was pretty sharp though, kudos for that...just...kinda wish you would have finished it, it showed great potential

3/5 for uploading unfinished work

Well, the song just got too repetitive and I knew I wasn't going to finish it. So I uploaded it anyway. My next amv is in the works so you can think of this as a taster, maybe. And I'm glad you liked it.

Niotex · Post by **Niotex** » Thu May 03, 2007 4:39 pm

There is one huge error in this video it being the aspect ratio. Other then that its a simple short rather then a actual video. Its ok I guess with nothing special to it and the FX that were used later on were of the "bin there done that" kind. Overall pretty ok none the less.

7/10

-GfN- · Post by **-GfN-** » Sat May 05, 2007 4:24 am

I pretty much agree with nio, especially on the ar: good, solid and very fitting editing, with a good use of otherwise retarded white flashes and apprpriate yet simple fx in the last part.
still, although the editing only works for such a small time, I would have approved of the ending to be less abrupt.

/me likes 6.8/10

~Jannis

Kevmaster · Post by **Kevmaster** » Sat May 05, 2007 5:37 am

hmh..that was short

but it was pretty good, but I felt like you should have matched those hard main beats more..

..if you know what I mean O.o

3,4/5

Dark Confusion · Post by **Dark Confusion** » Sat May 05, 2007 10:51 am

Kevmasterflashdeluxe wrote:hmh..that was short

but it was pretty good, but I felt like you should have matched those hard main beats more..

..if you know what I mean O.o

3,4/5

O.o What are you talking about, the synching was all over the place.

Anyhow, I think the ending was bit abrupt and unfitting, but the job up to it was well done and all. A good first one, definitely.