Hehe, nice video you made there, it´s pretty much my taste when it comes to drama still a bit too slow. You could use the interludes and drumrolls a bit more to speed it up a little bit in my opinion (like you did at 2:50). Cause otherwise the flow might be good but there is no striking and memorizable part in the video which makes it seem kind of too long. But generally a very good drama video to begin with, not to mention that the sources were both my taste which is another plus. The only things that annoyed me a bit was that it seems you overfiltered the anime a bit, which seems to be common with the Air Movie though since I´ve seen that in multiple videos, so I guess the videosource looks very jaggy or it´s already that smoothed out. Any those small technical problems don´t ruin the video thus I´ll stop complaining now and watch it again.
Edit: I see that Baka already gave you some useful feedback on the smoothing. I guess I was to late
