Black Lagoon AMV - Red Fraction

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Black Lagoon AMV - Red Fraction

Post by panzerzanaku » Tue Apr 24, 2007 4:27 pm

http://www.animemusicvideos.org/members ... p?v=142992


yo whats up ppl
this my second amv, its about the anime black lagoon. I used the theme song red fraction from the series, had me loads of fun making this vid.
lo Had a little trouble at first for the end sequences but it turned out great.

Hope u guys enjoy it. ^_^

comments welcomed

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Kaxi
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Post by Kaxi » Tue Apr 24, 2007 4:43 pm

I love the series and the song as well. The video quality was quite bad though. It wasn't very interesting editing wise, it got a little better in the second half, but overall nothing amazing.
4/10.
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Post by Kalium » Tue Apr 24, 2007 9:11 pm

First, aspect ratio. Black Lagoon is 16:9. There is absolutely no reason why I should be seeing it in 4:3. Or for it to be changing between the two.

Second, DivX logo. There's also no reason for that.

Third, video quality. It's pretty bad. I've seen much better, so I know it's possible.

Fourth, flow. This is a high energy song, so it needs high energy and fast paced editing. You get better closer to the end, but it's seriously lacking through much of the video.

Fifth, timing. This is the technical core of any video, and, again, you're largely lacking. It gets dramatically better about halfway through, but it's still iffy.

Finally, WTF is going on here? All I can make out is a mostly sequential overview of Black Lagoon.

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