ok you've got nice atmosphere, but your cuts are too sharp, it would have worked better with some fades instead. oh and lay off the white flash in the second half... it's too abrupt compared to your other transitions
although some sync is off in general it flows well.
I think you haven't de-interlaced... had to tell there's so many static scenes
and thats about it from me, cause i've got other stuff to do
oh and if you take it to the opinion exchange forum i think you can get more detailed feedback