I quite enjoyed this video, even though there's a lot of flaws in it. But it's really not bad for a first video at all.

Also, kudos on song choice! One of my favourites by Vertical Horizon.
Biggest problems were the visual quality and size, for the quality the size was pretty big, but that's because you didn't compress your audio (as you said).
The quality was quite low and the big black borders around the video were quite offputting, and some scenes had some pretty bad interlacing. But even so everything was visible, you could make everything out, so it's wasn't awful.
Also, how did you get the footage? DVD rip? I'm sure you can find plenty of great guides as to how to improve the quality of your footage easily, they're all over the org.
Only other gripe was the lack of "story" of sorts.. I'm the kind of viewer who looks for a story in a video, and while some parts were pretty concentrated, other parts didn't have any "story" and seemed like random clips. I'm not sure if others think this but the "miracle" seemed to change constantly to all different kinds of things.
But overall, not a bad video, and definately good for a first try

your editing seems promising, I'll be looking forward to any future videos.