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I invite you to watch my second made video AMV Rozen Maiden

Post by Vo!D » Wed Mar 14, 2007 2:17 am

Pls Watch and see my second video

Rozen Maiden
Song Unwell

http://www.animemusicvideos.org/members ... _id=140512

Pls rate it lots of thanks :wink:
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Re: I invite you to watch my second made video AMV Rozen Mai

Post by Vo!D » Wed Mar 14, 2007 2:23 am

Vo!D wrote:Pls Watch and see my second video

Rozen Maiden
Song Unwell

http://www.animemusicvideos.org/members ... _id=140512

Pls rate it lots of thanks :wink:
Forgot to add my youtube version of the video heres the link

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=HPQRXoSgVXI[/url]
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Post by Otohiko » Wed Mar 14, 2007 2:29 am

1) Wrong forum - don't do anything now, a mod will move it to AMV Announcements. Please post further announcements there.

2) NOTE! Your sig is too big. Please check the forum rules - no more than two images at 600x40 pixels each

Thank you, carry on :roll:
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Post by chosef » Wed Mar 14, 2007 3:21 am

Hey, not bad for a second vid...

You like geometry, huh? Unfortunately your geometry doesn't like the music sometimes... or just doesn't hear it so some of those flying and appearing things aren't really synced imo. Many of them seem to be out of place and have no reason to be there at all and randomness ensues. They are still well done tho.

I kinda liked it even though it isn't my favourite kind of vid mood-vise. Keep it up and all that. :)
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Post by Vo!D » Wed Mar 14, 2007 4:32 am

Ty and sory for the sig thingy

anyway, when I uploaded it, it became like that it went a bit off with timing in the music and things.

also... Thanks for the admin for pointing me in the right direction.

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Post by Szwagier » Wed Mar 14, 2007 4:14 pm

Well first of all I suggest you to less rely on Euphoria for inspiration. The connection is too obvious, and since those "Euphoria like" effects most of the time aren't synched they look completely out of place. On the contrary effects of your own idea (i. e. The clock) seem quite nice. I suggest you to search like this for your own style of effects, since that is always best.

That said I think the vid loose much because of the effects - they were breaking the flow. Since normal footage was synched nicely, adding an unsynched effects wasn't best idea.

Apart from that the Vid is quite nice one for a second vid. Both synch and the mood are done nicely. The lip flap could be cutted though. I also suggest working on a quality part.
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Post by Vo!D » Wed Mar 14, 2007 7:04 pm

Szwagier wrote:Well first of all I suggest you to less rely on Euphoria for inspiration. The connection is too obvious, and since those "Euphoria like" effects most of the time aren't synched they look completely out of place. On the contrary effects of your own idea (i. e. The clock) seem quite nice. I suggest you to search like this for your own style of effects, since that is always best.

That said I think the vid loose much because of the effects - they were breaking the flow. Since normal footage was synched nicely, adding an unsynched effects wasn't best idea.

Apart from that the Vid is quite nice one for a second vid. Both synch and the mood are done nicely. The lip flap could be cutted though. I also suggest working on a quality part.

Thanks a alot :P Im in the learning process of making a video and experimenting with it is one of them and of course seen lots of video and wanted to actually try it myself if I could do it.

Anyway Im planning to make my third video about Suigintou and I have already picked the perfect song for her. Problem thou is it advisable to put the lyrics of the song in the video ? like the ones in the karaoke type.

I wanted to put the lyrics for the viewers to understand more about the song and the relation with the character involved in the video.

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