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Shuffle! - Beyond the Skies

Post by ScorpionP » Sat Feb 24, 2007 5:59 pm

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Hi all, I'm back with a new AMV, so check it out :D This time it's a little different but I hope you like it... Ops, comments, feedback are all much appreciated.
More about it on video info page:



Enjoy :) !
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Post by Autraya » Sat Feb 24, 2007 6:46 pm

I hope it doesn't file a sexual harrasment suit against me for checking it out :cry: ok my humour sucks this morning.
Downlooooooooading and probably for the next day or five since I'm capped
new banzors in the making :p

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Post by Flame-X » Sat Feb 24, 2007 7:08 pm

Its pretty good
Sorry but Im more of a Kaede fan >=D

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Post by Nekoteo » Sat Feb 24, 2007 7:34 pm

Overall a pretty good video. Not a fan of the song and I feel the need to point out that this was a little too emo. I never make emo comments...But then again I've never seen that happen in an anime/AMV. D:

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Post by Fizziks » Sat Feb 24, 2007 11:08 pm

A nicely paced, dramatic video. I enjoyed it!

Keep up the great work! :up:
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Post by Unlimited Rice » Sun Feb 25, 2007 1:20 am

Asa... good shot man, good shot :)

awesome video

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Post by ScorpionP » Sun Feb 25, 2007 2:40 am

Autraya wrote:I hope it doesn't file a sexual harrasment suit against me for checking it out :cry: ok my humour sucks this morning.
o and probably for the next day or five since I'm capped
ty for taking my thread's virginityXD
Clamp-X wrote:Its pretty good
Sorry but Im more of a Kaede fan >=D
At first I tried to make Rin/Asa/Kaede video, but in the end I just picked Asa :)
Nekoteo wrote:Overall a pretty good video. Not a fan of the song and I feel the need to point out that this was a little too emo. I never make emo comments...But then again I've never seen that happen in an anime/AMV. D:
I'm not a fan of the song either, I picked it because of the lyrics =)
Fizziks wrote:A nicely paced, dramatic video. I enjoyed it!

Keep up the great work!
Thanks Fizziks :D
Unlimited Rice wrote:Asa... good shot man, good shot

awesome video
Thanks, I appreciate it :D
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Post by Kalium » Sun Feb 25, 2007 10:27 am

That was very well done. I really only have two complaints:
  • * First, the mask right around 0:30. The background misty coloration is there before the faces are. It looks kinda bad.
    * Your initial thematic stuff is a little misleading. I can see the lyric sync, but it more than implies some rather tragic turn of events... which then never quite materializes.
Very good, but a bit confusing on that note.

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Post by ScorpionP » Sun Feb 25, 2007 5:31 pm

1. I wanted to animate them a little so they don't look to static...
2. I always prefered happy endings (but I also like dramatic events before it XD )

Thanks for commenting :)
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Post by Kalium » Sun Feb 25, 2007 10:25 pm

ScorpionP wrote:1. I wanted to animate them a little so they don't look to static...
Generally a good idea. The specific issue here is that the white layer you outlined them with appears noticeably before they do. I suspect it would look better if it faded in with them.

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