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naruto simple and clean

Post by Ferryarthur » Thu Dec 28, 2006 11:13 am

http://www.animemusicvideos.org/members ... p?v=135735

Well first of all hi i`m new here :D

well this is my first try , and it was just for testing wmm but it turned out okay it only contains 1 ep and was done in a hurry and by accident i used the long version of simple and clean.(and the first 20 sec are the worst part i think it gets better and alot better in some parts.

and i ll make new ones with more eps and things like that
i ll keep u updated (i hope) :P

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Post by CodeZTM » Thu Dec 28, 2006 3:22 pm

Wow. Another Naruto first video. I'll take a look see at it, and leave you come comments on this post.

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Post by Ferryarthur » Thu Dec 28, 2006 4:10 pm

oke thx alot yeah it was becase it was the only thing i had access 2, and this was more of a test but it turned out okay i think:)

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Post by CodeZTM » Fri Dec 29, 2006 5:45 pm

Ok, for a first video, this was ok. There were several problems that many newcomers face. First, subtitles and words (from the opening sequences of Naruto) is not good. The video quality was poor. Remember, DVD quality is the best. The AMV didn't seem to have an overall story. It was just a bunch of random clips put to music. An AMV needs to tell a story, and match the lyrics. Subtitles also need to be removed. Many of your clips were also waaay too long. I personally think any clips over 5-7 seconds is too long. Windows movie maker is also a subpar video editor. I would get a trial version of another editor or get another free one. I know in the video section of this forum they have a long list of video editors that are for free. I would also spring for the Naruto DVD's. Speaking of Naruto, it isn't exactly the world's best anime to use here. At the moment, it is the most overused Anime used in AMV's, and many people here are overly sick of it. Simple and Clean is also a vastly overused song. But, I digress. I'd read Phade's Guide to Making Good Anime Music Videos, along with taking a look at other AMV's here. You'll do fine with time. My first few AMV's (wait..) were also on this same level, if not much worse. I suggest that you put a little time and effort into this, and you will do fine.

For a score, 2/5 or 4/10.

If you have any questions, comments, cries of anger and hatred, just send me a pm.

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Post by Cornwiggle » Fri Dec 29, 2006 6:09 pm

code_chrono wrote: Windows movie maker is also a subpar video editor. I would get a trial version of another editor or get another free one.
Good programs can't improve a novice editor.

I would say keep using WMM until you really get the hang of making AMVs first THEN upgrade the program.
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Post by Ferryarthur » Fri Dec 29, 2006 6:15 pm

well in my case mabye it can cause i need o be able to use rm clips and stuff or have a way to convert it,and this was more of a test, i wasn t really trying and the reason i used long clips was because i hade to go to bed so i wanted to finish it fast(stupid i know)

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