i agree with this. When the supernatural elements came into play, it suddenly seemed less sentimental, and gave me a more "....eh?" factor. Although in terms of editing, and 'feeling the song' i think you did a far superior job in the end. I liked the verses, and the editing style, but when it came to the chorus's i just felt they were a little empty. The chorus's didn't connect to the feelings and emotions as well (although this changed towards the very end).Moonlight Soldier wrote:Once the supernatural aspect was added to it, I felt the sentimentality was lost.
I like it, and i'll keep it for a while, but i still think Sound Life is your best dramatic/sentimental piece to date.