New naruto AMV: Shukuteki

nemesis3034 · Post by **nemesis3034** » Mon Aug 14, 2006 2:47 pm

member name: Shinobi34

Title of Video: Shukuteki

Catagory: Action, Drama, Character profile

Song: Until the Day I Die by Story of the Year

Anime: Naruto

Hello everybody check out my new video its called Shukuteki the video is about Naruto and Sasuke's friendship and rivalry. My goal for this video was to be a little more technical with this video more than i was with my past videos. for those of you critics out there be brutal and give me some technique tips, i want to get better. Any one who want to email me with questions or comments email me at gwilliams3034@hotmail.com or just give me an opinion thanx.

Link
http://www.animemusicvideos.org/members ... p?v=125841

x_rex30 · Post by **x_rex30** » Mon Aug 14, 2006 6:52 pm

I can't say I was impressed.

I guess it was ok but nothing special.

You messed up a lot with the visual quality. You added interlacing artifacts into your footage when originally the footage is progressive. I don't want to go over how you could of done it but if you still have the project file I think you should fix that problem and reupload it.

I thought the concept was pretty good but the execution wasn't good IMO. And it may have been just me but the audio didn't sound very good.

Shinodude · Post by **Shinodude** » Mon Aug 14, 2006 7:21 pm

id recomend not using a black bar to cover up the subtitles and to rip footage or at leas crop them off or somthing

nemesis3034 · Post by **nemesis3034** » Mon Aug 14, 2006 7:47 pm

well i thought that adding a black bar rather than croping would give me the affect that i wanted for the video, more dramatic, and i thought that the alternative would have made everything more stretched out like my last video "she will be loved"

Shinodude · Post by **Shinodude** » Mon Aug 14, 2006 7:48 pm

nemesis3034 wrote:well i thought that adding a black bar rather than croping would give me the affect that i wanted for the video, more dramatic, and i thought that the alternative would have made everything more stretched out like my last video "she will be loved"

well then next time place the bar correctly so it dont look so obvoiuse

nemesis3034 · Post by **nemesis3034** » Tue Aug 15, 2006 11:49 am

shinodude i see what your talking about there is a small part the video thats not blacked out on the bottom... i guess it wasnt large enough. thanx for responding.

I can't say I was impressed.

I guess it was ok but nothing special.

You messed up a lot with the visual quality. You added interlacing artifacts into your footage when originally the footage is progressive. I don't want to go over how you could of done it but if you still have the project file I think you should fix that problem and reupload it.

I thought the concept was pretty good but the execution wasn't good IMO. And it may have been just me but the audio didn't sound very good.

i see what you were talking about there were two scenes with overlays that i didnt really like in the first place, but i thought that it would help with the concept of my video..... i guess i tried to do too much and it didnt pan out that well i went back and changed the ones i thought weren't needed and it actually made my video run alot smoother thanx.