Fullmetal Fantasy Love, my first focused AMV

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Fullmetal Fantasy Love, my first focused AMV

Post by TheOneFreeman » Thu Aug 03, 2006 4:38 pm

Hi, I'm new here, this is my first AMV I have truly spent an amount of time
on. Please tell me what you think.
http://www.animemusicvideos.org/members ... p?v=124856

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Post by CodeZTM » Thu Aug 03, 2006 5:28 pm

Wow, I actually loved this AMV! However, it wasn't perfect, and I must critique accordingly.

No. 1 - Don't use the same clip several times in a row (Winry Spinning) (Minus one Point)

No. 2 - Lip Flap... (Minus One Point)

No. 3 - DivX Logo... (Minus One Point)

7 out of 10! Not bad, I was really impressed with the beautiful Video quality. Also, you made a FFVIIAC Video look happy! Actually, scratch that, 8/10! Again, loose the lip flap with ed and winry, loose the DivX logo, and you've got yourself a great AMV!

Chrono seal of approval!

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Post by juan012285 » Thu Aug 03, 2006 5:43 pm

I enjoyed this video, great job.

I agree with code_chrono I didn't like that Winry scene that much and the lip flap.

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Post by TheOneFreeman » Thu Aug 03, 2006 5:55 pm

How do I get rid of the DivX Logo

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Post by TheOneFreeman » Thu Aug 03, 2006 5:58 pm

Sorry for the double post, I can't find a way to edit,
I'm familiar with the DivX logo, and its not in the video I put on here, so I'm confused, its on the one you downloaded?

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Post by CodeZTM » Thu Aug 03, 2006 6:50 pm

Yeah, it was. :shock:

However, if you want to get rid of it, check out th e"guides" section of the members main page.

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Post by TheOneFreeman » Thu Aug 03, 2006 6:52 pm

just so i can check that my video doesn't have it or w/e, can you tell me one place in the video where it was present, if I remember correctly the DivX Logo appears and disappears randomly

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Post by CodeZTM » Thu Aug 03, 2006 6:54 pm

If it disappears and reappears randomly, then how am I supposed to tell you where it is? :shock:

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Post by TheOneFreeman » Thu Aug 03, 2006 6:58 pm

a part of the video, just where are you seeing the DivX logo, the whole time, or some of the time like I've seen it

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Post by Shinodude » Thu Aug 03, 2006 7:55 pm

your amv inspierd me nice job but the interlacing was annoying well I pretty much will bicker about the same things chrono pointed out

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