69 Bakuretsu

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69 Bakuretsu

Post by StrangeAsAngels » Fri May 26, 2006 8:41 am

This is my second AMV and really my first action vid. Any constructive criticism would be helpful to me.

Thanks! :D

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Post by Kaxi » Fri May 26, 2006 11:56 am

Hmmm, strange... But hey, this is good! Not bad at all, not bad. I see you tried to sync a lot of action to the song and it was mainly good, but at some parts i felt it wasn't in sync, but just a bit off. So nice action vid, but i ought to point out that the intro and the outro are almost as long as the amv itself - you should make shorter intros and outros in your next amv. (and you'd better choose a little longer song :D).
So anyway, nice job.

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Post by StrangeAsAngels » Sun May 28, 2006 11:21 am

Thanks for you opinion. BTW, which parts did you think were not in sync? If you could post the time markers and what you thought was out of pace I could re-evaluate those scenes and possibly improve on them.

The outro could be a bit shorter, but I made it that way to give a little screentime to the collage my daughter made for me for the end.

Glad you enjoyed it. :D

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